I'm liking how Hanako's outline works well with the gradient drop in the background. The hair's pretty well done, too.
Both the bust and the forehead seem a little too large, but disregarding that, this picture seems like a huge improvement from your earlier works. Keep at it, because your art's turning out great.
They're all pretty good, I especially like the coloring!
I browsed your DA page and there's some neat stuff in there too, love the coloring in the Madoka Magica fanart.
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Woody Alien wrote:They're all pretty good, I especially like the coloring!
I browsed your DA page and there's some neat stuff in there too, love the coloring in the Madoka Magica fanart.
Thank you, I'm glad you like some of them. There will be more soon I think. At least I'm planning on another Hanako artwork for her birthday next month.
Umber wrote:I'm liking how Hanako's outline works well with the gradient drop in the background. The hair's pretty well done, too.
Both the bust and the forehead seem a little too large, but disregarding that, this picture seems like a huge improvement from your earlier works. Keep at it, because your art's turning out great.
The criticism is appreciated. I'll work on the proportions some more the next time around. With every project, I aim to improve, at least just a little if anything. Thanks.
I'm curious as to whether yoiu meant to show her without any scars purposely, or if it's just something that you left out when doing it. I mean, either way, it does work. It creates an interesting effect where the scars seem just out of view. I just want to know if that was intentional or not.
I'm curious as to whether yoiu meant to show her without any scars purposely, or if it's just something that you left out when doing it. I mean, either way, it does work. It creates an interesting effect where the scars seem just out of view. I just want to know if that was intentional or not.
I got sick when working on this, so I was a little out of it and forgot to add the scars. They completely slipped my mind. I'll probably go back and add them on. There were a few other things I might adjust as well. If it doesn't turn out well, I will just add the scars.