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Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 10:03 am
Forget it.
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Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 10:04 am
Forget it.
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 11:57 am
That was...
Word's can't explain how well-written this is.
Word's can't explain how well-written this is.
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
Posted: Mon Dec 31, 2012 11:26 pm
Oh dear. I don't want to hate you, dude. At least that content warning hasn't come into effect yet. But it's a sombre warning for chapters to come. Oh dear.
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2013 3:34 am
Vladimir Zedong.(get it?)doomish wrote:Len Mao
A well written story and an interesting plot, I wonder what hisao would think if hanako dissaperd after a fight.
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2013 5:08 am
This will either be horrible or incredible. Possibly both. The forum drama alone should be worth the effort.
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2013 6:36 am
We're probably going to find out!Comrade wrote: A well written story and an interesting plot, I wonder what hisao would think if hanako dissaperd after a fight.
Thank you all for your comments so far, no matter how uncertain they may be. I'm looking forward to this as much as the rest of you, after all.
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
Posted: Tue Jan 01, 2013 9:57 am
I'm pretty afraid to follow this. Hopefully it won't end horribly and leave me deppressed for a week.
On another note their is no being more contemptable than a Human trafficker. Need money? How about you and your girlfriend get beaten to death by a sackful of quarters. It's going to be far faster and more merciful than what happens to your victims.
On another note their is no being more contemptable than a Human trafficker. Need money? How about you and your girlfriend get beaten to death by a sackful of quarters. It's going to be far faster and more merciful than what happens to your victims.
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 7:42 am
Um, uh.. Interesting.
I'm looking forward for more. I hope this doesn't ends badly and
I'm looking forward for more. I hope this doesn't ends badly and
Negativedarke wrote:leave me depressed for a week.
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [12/31]
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:17 pm
damn it, this last chapter almost made me physically ill! can't say that I like that feeling but I just can't stop reading...
that bar douche bag has some serious bullshit going on in his head..
awesome story looking forward to the next chapter!
that bar douche bag has some serious bullshit going on in his head..
awesome story looking forward to the next chapter!
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]
Posted: Thu Jan 03, 2013 11:57 pm
Forget it.
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2013 3:59 am
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2013 4:06 am
I will MURDER YOU WHERE YOU SLEEP, DOOMISH. Don't think I won't find it. I know where every single person on the internet lives, and I've got the power of Bowser, Ganon, AND Dracula on my side! 
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2013 5:01 am
Any specific reason for the chapter 3 rewrite? (I read the original on pastebin)
Re: Misstep [Hanako] [EXPLICIT CONTENT] [1/3]
Posted: Fri Jan 04, 2013 5:15 am
I felt like changing the plot's progression to be a little bit slower-paced. Instead of jumping right in, I had Len Mao stick to his word from Chapter 2 and start Hanako off small. It's changed on Pastebin now too.JTC545 wrote:Any specific reason for the chapter 3 rewrite? (I read the original on pastebin)