Wait...reverse-rape? Link please! I must check it out...for science, of course.themocaw wrote:Yeah, well, the original writing prompt this story was derived from was Misha raping Mutou, so I did the porn scene first then backfilled.Oddball wrote:Oddly enough, I just read the older version day before yesterday and really felt that stuff destroyed the story you had going.
MishMutou
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BobBobberson
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Re: MishMutou
That guy who writes too many crossovers.
Running Interference, a tale of Hisao and another purple-eyed girl.
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Running Interference, a tale of Hisao and another purple-eyed girl.
My One-Shot Depository full of random stories
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Re: MishMutou
Good change.themocaw wrote:Yeah, well, the original writing prompt this story was derived from was Misha raping Mutou, so I did the porn scene first then backfilled.Oddball wrote:Oddly enough, I just read the older version day before yesterday and really felt that stuff destroyed the story you had going.
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Re: MishMutou
PMs.BobBobberson wrote:Wait...reverse-rape? Link please! I must check it out...for science, of course.themocaw wrote:Yeah, well, the original writing prompt this story was derived from was Misha raping Mutou, so I did the porn scene first then backfilled.Oddball wrote:Oddly enough, I just read the older version day before yesterday and really felt that stuff destroyed the story you had going.
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Scissorlips
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Re: MishMutou
Not necessarily "raping", it was actually "won't take no for an answer". But yeah.themocaw wrote:Yeah, well, the original writing prompt this story was derived from was Misha raping Mutou, so I did the porn scene first then backfilled.
Glad to see this story again. I agree that removing the blowjob improved the piece as a whole, and I don't remember the epilogue being there last time, that was a punch to the gut. But in a good way.
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Re: MishMutou
Ugh, now I have to support this dumb pairing. Thanks for writing so good.
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Re: MishMutou
I've struck gold. Great work.
Girls: Hanako/Misha > Lilly > Emi > Shizune/Rin
Routes: I realized that every route has its own charms, but felt that Shizune's was lackluster. It has Misha though!
"No masters or kings, when the ritual begins
There is no sweeter innocence than our gentle sin"
Routes: I realized that every route has its own charms, but felt that Shizune's was lackluster. It has Misha though!
"No masters or kings, when the ritual begins
There is no sweeter innocence than our gentle sin"
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Dontsquishthemish
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Re: MishMutou
I loved this story way too much, I love how you did the scene changes it was disjointed but it still seemed to fit with the story in a very strange way. Like it was a story that wasn't supposed to flow
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