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Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 1:06 am
by Captain Hobo
i should have killed myself long ago

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 1:17 am
by CNB
The collar could use a little work but I like overall feel, nice loose lines.

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 2:28 am
by Captain Hobo
i should have killed myself long ago

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 4:59 am
by Captain Hobo
i should have killed myself long ago

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 5:12 am
by charmisokay
:)
good work, I like it.

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 6:13 am
by Captain Hobo
i should have killed myself long ago

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 9:22 am
by CNB
You might find her eyes look better/more like official art if you remove the highlight.

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2012 8:34 pm
by Captain Hobo
i should have killed myself long ago

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 2:57 am
by CNB
As I mentioned before, I like the loose lines; they look very spontaneous, and give a nice sense of volume to her torso even without shading.

Her face looks a bit flat in the colored version (mostly because the shadows cast by her bangs and chin don't look like they're falling on curved surfaces), and her features are a bit misaligned -- which I think you must have noticed, since you fooled around with the eyes and mouth a couple times while moving from the initial line sketch to the final colored version.

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Mon Feb 13, 2012 3:14 am
by Captain Hobo
i should have killed myself long ago

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:31 pm
by Captain Hobo
i should have killed myself long ago

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:37 pm
by GIRakaCHEEZER
Captain Hobo wrote:This game has broken me.
I don't know how it happened but Lilly has just consumed me.
I'll have dreams of me leading her around and talking to her.
Holding her hand.
Embracing her.

I have never felt this way about a fictional character before and don't think I will ever be the same person I was before I played this game.
I'm a 21 year old Australian bloke who has fallen for a collection of ideas and pixels. Who before this had his heart caged off to avoid getting hurt again and had no motivation to do something in life.
As perplexed as these feelings make me, as much as it hurts to wake up from those dreams feeling empty and broken...

It's good. Because I can now fix myself the way I want, so I can find my Lilly in life.

Thank you to everyone who made Katawa Shoujo possible.

Thank you from the bottom of my heart.
Just give it a couple of weeks or so. This game seems to induce a sort of depression/love in people that takes a while to wear off.

Also who is that person with the pink glasses?

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Wed Feb 22, 2012 10:40 pm
by griffon8
GIRakaCHEEZER wrote:Also who is that person with the pink glasses?
Nomiya in his hipster days.

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 12:40 am
by Captain Hobo
i should have killed myself long ago

Re: Lil' bit of Lilly in mah life.

Posted: Thu Feb 23, 2012 1:03 am
by GIRakaCHEEZER
Captain Hobo wrote:
GIRakaCHEEZER wrote:Just give it a couple of weeks or so. This game seems to induce a sort of depression/love in people that takes a while to wear off.

Also who is that person with the pink glasses?
It's been about 3 weeks for me now. The pink glasses feller is a random scribble I did getting familiar with SAI.
Time is still my recommendation. If you still feel down in a month or so though I would look at getting some help or whatever.

Also it really does look like a young Nomiya.