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Re: Ask!

Post by Aura » Mon Dec 14, 2015 6:30 am

wawon0 wrote:Why are there so many students at Yamaku when they play a very little role in the story?
Almost every setting to a story is much larger than the space the story requires. Why are there so many hobbits in the Shire? Why are there so many buildings in Neo-Tokyo? This should be obvious; it's because otherwise the setting would feel unnatural and bizarre.

I recommend No Exit by Jean-Paul Sartre to you. It's VERY economical in terms of setting.
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Re: Ask!

Post by Azure Henry » Fri Dec 18, 2015 12:29 am

Does the student in Hisao's class who uses a cane have a name? He sits in the back and is noticed by Hisao on his first day, but never seems to come up again.
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Post by brythain » Fri Dec 18, 2015 12:40 am

Azure Henry wrote:Does the student in Hisao's class who uses a cane have a name? He sits in the back and is noticed by Hisao on his first day, but never seems to come up again.
Akio Hayashi, from the Yearbook picture.
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Re: Ask!

Post by Azure Henry » Fri Dec 18, 2015 12:47 am

brythain wrote:
Azure Henry wrote:Does the student in Hisao's class who uses a cane have a name? He sits in the back and is noticed by Hisao on his first day, but never seems to come up again.
Akio Hayashi, from the Yearbook picture.
Thanks so much!
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Re: Ask!

Post by Kon22 » Mon Dec 21, 2015 7:45 am

I know you get a lot like these, but, what would you say is the most common mistake rookies make when they want to make a visual novel (Or a similar project, really)? Trying to chew more than they can swallow? Lack of organization? Lack of focus on the project?

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Re: Ask!

Post by Suriko » Mon Dec 21, 2015 8:19 am

Kon22 wrote:I know you get a lot like these, but, what would you say is the most common mistake rookies make when they want to make a visual novel (Or a similar project, really)? Trying to chew more than they can swallow? Lack of organization? Lack of focus on the project?
Scope.

Just writing and seeing where it goes leads to tremendous amounts of problems. If you can plan out the scenario and roughly how each scene will play out, you can get a good idea of assets required (in terms of sprites, CGs, and music). Even if it's a small VN, having a shopping list of what's needed helps dramatically in terms of having a common goal in mind between everyone, and an easy way to keep tasks available for everyone involved.

Given how stupid KS's development process was, "let's make something like KS" saddens me every time I see it.

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Re: Ask!

Post by Klefx » Wed Dec 23, 2015 9:40 pm

Who wrote the scene names/descriptions and the act names?

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Post by Zykes » Thu Dec 24, 2015 1:29 am

When approaching the steps for writing the story, did you feel comfortable with the ability you had, or did you feel you had to touch up on it with a guide book to help some of your weaker points or even take writing classes?

And in any case, would you suggest doing either of those things for anyone else looking to improve their writing?
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Post by Silentcook » Thu Dec 24, 2015 9:36 am

Klefx wrote:Who wrote the scene names/descriptions and the act names?
The scene and act titles were a joint effort, but the path writers took care of most of their respective areas of responsibility.

The scene descriptions were mostly written by me, but the path writers pitched in, particularly in act 1.
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Post by Aura » Sat Dec 26, 2015 5:32 am

Zykes wrote:When approaching the steps for writing the story, did you feel comfortable with the ability you had, or did you feel you had to touch up on it with a guide book to help some of your weaker points or even take writing classes?

And in any case, would you suggest doing either of those things for anyone else looking to improve their writing?
I knew I was bad, but it didn't occur me to go take a course at that stage. So yeah I guess you could say I felt comfortable.
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Post by cpl_crud » Sat Dec 26, 2015 7:48 am

Aura wrote:
Zykes wrote:When approaching the steps for writing the story, did you feel comfortable with the ability you had, or did you feel you had to touch up on it with a guide book to help some of your weaker points or even take writing classes?

And in any case, would you suggest doing either of those things for anyone else looking to improve their writing?
I knew I was bad, but it didn't occur me to go take a course at that stage. So yeah I guess you could say I felt comfortable.
I guess I have a similar story.

I was fairly confident in myself when I started, so I didn't really study anything.

However, the "school of 4LS" taught me more than I realised, and looking back on early stuff is pretty cringe inducing for me.

I suppose that the standard adage of "if you want to get good at something, do a lot of it" applies, but you also need to have some trusted advisors to move you out of your naive mindset and help you perform.
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Re: Ask!

Post by Kon22 » Fri Jan 01, 2016 1:28 pm

Happy new year, y'all!

During the development, did you ever feel like someone was trying to implement their ideas over the rest? Did everyone, artists included, have a say on the direction the project was going or did you all simply resonate well and it never became a problem? Do you feel like this could be a problem in a project of this scale and these characteristics (Non profitable, for example)?

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Re: Ask!

Post by Aura » Sat Jan 02, 2016 8:07 am

Yeah. The KS project didn't have clear creative leadership, so the people who spent the most time or most vigor into the creative discussions and feedback clearly had more influence than others. I was one of them, but even though I was the head writer I didn't want to drown out the creative voices of the rest of the script team. I had to consciously dial down the pressure I was putting on others and learn to let things slide. In a project of KS's magnitude it's not possible for everyone to be satisfied with everything anyway, so it was good to learn to pick my fights.

And yes it absolutely can be a huge problem. If some people feel their concerns and ideas aren't being heard, it can lead to frustration, feelings of alienation and lack of motivation.
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Re: Ask!

Post by Lazlow89 » Sun Jan 03, 2016 4:19 pm

Hi,

I just wanted to say thank you! Thank you all for your work, I really enjoyed every path.

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Re: Ask!

Post by baskervald » Mon Jan 11, 2016 5:58 pm

I'm sorry if it's been asked before, but what're your opinions on fan "spiritual successors" to Katawa Shoujo that, while technically adhering to your license, are clearly inspired by KS?

(not because I want to make one -- I personally think they're fairly unoriginal, and now that KS exists there's no point in another visual novel featuring an all-disabled cast and that more imaginative angles should be taken -- but just because I'm curious about your feelings on it after recently finding out about Full Hearts)

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