It is the reason why nobody in these forums will ever see the 12,000 word piece I wrote detailing Misaki Kawana's strange obsession with sneaking into the boys' dorms at night and taking photos of them sleeping. Rin caught her once, though.Eurobeatjester wrote:This just happened to me in an unrelated event in real life.
As writers, was there any idea that you were so excited about when it popped up, that you spent time enthusiastically fleshing it out, only to have another member of the team slam the brakes on it with one of those "Um, am I really the only one who's going to point out that this is a really, really bad idea?"
Damn that voice of reason!
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Post-Yamaku, what happens? After The Dream is a mosaic that follows everyone to the (sometimes) bitter end.
Main Index (Complete)—Shizune/Lilly/Emi/Hanako/Rin/Misha + Miki + Natsume
Secondary Arcs: Rika/Mutou/Akira • Hideaki | Others (WIP): Straw—A Dream of Suzu • Sakura—The Kenji Saga.
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Main Index (Complete)—Shizune/Lilly/Emi/Hanako/Rin/Misha + Miki + Natsume
Secondary Arcs: Rika/Mutou/Akira • Hideaki | Others (WIP): Straw—A Dream of Suzu • Sakura—The Kenji Saga.
"Much has been lost, and there is much left to lose." — Tim Powers, The Drawing of the Dark (1979)
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A huge tattoo of Wassily Kandinsky and Salvador Dali making out.azarga wrote:Does Rin have any prominent features on her back? Birthmarks, i.e.
<Aura> would you squeeze a warm PVC bottle between your thighs and call it "manaka-chan"
<Suriko> I would do it if it wouldn't be so hard to explain to my parents
<Suriko> I would do it if it wouldn't be so hard to explain to my parents
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I'm sure just about every idea that shaked the boat enough got flattened by others. What's "reasonable" is very relative, but being unreasonable is not a reason to not do something.Eurobeatjester wrote:As writers, was there any idea that you were so excited about when it popped up, that you spent time enthusiastically fleshing it out, only to have another member of the team slam the brakes on it with one of those "Um, am I really the only one who's going to point out that this is a really, really bad idea?"
Damn that voice of reason! :lol:
<Aura> would you squeeze a warm PVC bottle between your thighs and call it "manaka-chan"
<Suriko> I would do it if it wouldn't be so hard to explain to my parents
<Suriko> I would do it if it wouldn't be so hard to explain to my parents
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The 150,000 words of the first Hanako draft.Eurobeatjester wrote:This just happened to me in an unrelated event in real life.
As writers, was there any idea that you were so excited about when it popped up, that you spent time enthusiastically fleshing it out, only to have another member of the team slam the brakes on it with one of those "Um, am I really the only one who's going to point out that this is a really, really bad idea?"
Damn that voice of reason!
But it was a good thing that they voted it down. It was silly.
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<Suriko> Crud would be patting Hanako's head
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<NicolArmarfi> crud is trying to dress hanako up like miku and attempting to get her to pose for him in headphones and he burns money
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<Suriko> Crud would be patting Hanako's head
<Suriko> In a non-creepy fatherly way
<NicolArmarfi> crud is trying to dress hanako up like miku and attempting to get her to pose for him in headphones and he burns money
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I have the weirdest boner right now.Aura wrote:A huge tattoo of Wassily Kandinsky and Salvador Dali making out.azarga wrote:Does Rin have any prominent features on her back? Birthmarks, i.e.
Like stupid, silly doodles with no point? You've come to the right place, friend :^)
I also occasionally write oneshots. Why not have a skimread?
Miki fic? Miki fic!
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I also occasionally write oneshots. Why not have a skimread?
Miki fic? Miki fic!
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"We are a small country full of the most stubborn bastards on the planet. You might want to rethink your actions." - Anon
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Couldn't be too silly, I mean, it led us to the final product.cpl_crud wrote:The 150,000 words of the first Hanako draft.
But it was a good thing that they voted it down. It was silly.
I was thinking of instances like one previously mentioned, such as Lilly giving Hanako a yacht in her route, given that her family is filthy stinking rich.Aura wrote:I'm sure just about every idea that shaked the boat enough got flattened by others. What's "reasonable" is very relative, but being unreasonable is not a reason to not do something.
Send me a PM. For...reasons.brythain wrote: It is the reason why nobody in these forums will ever see the 12,000 word piece I wrote detailing Misaki Kawana's strange obsession with sneaking into the boys' dorms at night and taking photos of them sleeping. Rin caught her once, though.
Stuff I'm currently writing: Learning To Fly: A Saki Enomoto Pseudo Route
Two Turtledoves - A Lilly/Hisao Christmas Oneshot
Two Turtledoves - A Lilly/Hisao Christmas Oneshot
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Same. Also;Eurobeatjester wrote:Send me a PM. For...reasons.brythain wrote: It is the reason why nobody in these forums will ever see the 12,000 word piece I wrote detailing Misaki Kawana's strange obsession with sneaking into the boys' dorms at night and taking photos of them sleeping. Rin caught her once, though.
Huh, the more you know.TheHivemind wrote:She'll go home and cry into her lover's arms, who will understand the whole high-school romance angle because she'd been through it too, once. Then they'll go to bed.
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During Lily's route, at what point does she decide to return to Scotland?
Sorry, the context has confused me.
Sorry, the context has confused me.
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Are you asking why she decided, or when she decided?
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When she's decided.
Thanks for the answer, by the way.
Thanks for the answer, by the way.
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Ah, the game never really mentions when she does. It's easy to see she's made the decision already in the scene or two leading up to the reveal, though.peanut666666 wrote:When she's decided.
Sorry, just wanted to make sure
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Two Turtledoves - A Lilly/Hisao Christmas Oneshot
Two Turtledoves - A Lilly/Hisao Christmas Oneshot
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