Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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This thread's comments section starts here. Some people like to read a story from the start all the way to the end before commenting. Others may like commenting sooner. Be careful with spoilers. It may be best to comment about story-related stuff in the following fashion:

Chapter 40 spoilers:
Chapter 40 stuff goes here.

Chapter 46 spoilers:
Chapter 46 stuff goes here.

This way, someone who's currently at chapter 44 can comment on the first part and avoid getting spoiled on the second.
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So it seems it took you just over an hour to post it all - congrats on that!

Now I wonder how long it will take until the first person has actually finished reading all of it. ;-)
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Yeah, this was about as quick as I could copy-paste 135 separate word documents into a thread. I'm pretty relieved the forum only requires you to wait like 20 seconds before posting again.
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Guest Poster wrote:Yeah, this was about as quick as I could copy-paste 135 separate word documents into a thread. I'm pretty relieved the forum only requires you to wait like 20 seconds before posting again.
Thank you very much. It was a pleasure the first two times round, and I look forward to reading it in this 'Director's Cut' deluxe version. :)
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Mixed feelings here. On the one hand, I loved the original and am happy to see more. On the other hand, you just took my free time, dumped it out a window, and set it on fire. Hanako pun not intended
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Uh ? why a title edition ? what happened ?
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Zarys wrote:Uh ? why a title edition ? what happened ?
There appear to be many, many differences between this and the original story.
"I don’t want to be here anymore, I know there’s nothing left worth staying for.
Your paradise is something I’ve endured
See I don’t think I can fight this anymore, I’m listening with one foot out the door
And something has to die to be reborn-I don’t want to be here anymore"
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The original story I posted two years ago had 18 chapters. This version has 64. Basically, this is the original story, now properly proof-read with a full-blown sequel following immediately after. It deserved its own thread.
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Guest Poster wrote:The original story I posted two years ago had 18 chapters. This version has 64. Basically, this is the original story, now properly proof-read with a full-blown sequel following immediately after. It deserved its own thread.
I love you, so so much right now. You have NO idea.
"I don’t want to be here anymore, I know there’s nothing left worth staying for.
Your paradise is something I’ve endured
See I don’t think I can fight this anymore, I’m listening with one foot out the door
And something has to die to be reborn-I don’t want to be here anymore"
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I don't think I've ever been this excited before for a fanfiction! My free time in the near future has just been thrown out the window and stepped on.
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This just made my day so much. I squealed with glee! My tablet will join me in bed tonight and I'll probably sleep in way later than appropriate.

I've cried during quite a few sad moments in several KS fanfics; however,the make up conversation between Lilly and Hanako near the end, where Hanako also convinces Lilly to stay, was the only time I've shed tears because I was so happy for characters.

I'll be happy to dive into it anew from the beginning. Am curious if I do notice the changes. And boy is there a lot of new content \o/
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Guest Poster wrote:The original story I posted two years ago had 18 chapters. This version has 64. Basically, this is the original story, now properly proof-read with a full-blown sequel following immediately after. It deserved its own thread.
Ah, so that's why there's so many chapters. Looking forward to reading! Kreygasm
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Ah, Guest Poster: Truly the Salinger of Katawa Shoujo fanfiction.
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Don't worry, you are largely second. :)
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— Porky Minch

"Can you face your fears ?"
— Hanako

I speak from the noise
Souls and shapes, forever twisted
the lost voices of the damned
lure the bringer of despair
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Re: Sisterhood: True Edition (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

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This is great, I really enjoyed the original version. Thank you!

Do you, by any chance, have a single file / epub version that you can upload so that I can slap it on a tablet?
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