Katawa Aniki (KS Rewrite) (18+ Occasionally) [Updated 10/30]

[YourFavAnon]

So is it fair to assume that Junichi's last name is actually Bay? Because I'm pretty sure his father is Michael Bay.

[ZtotheT]

As said above, love the story great job. Once again keep it going guys!

Oh and in response to Kane's sig spoiler:

That pic ain't workin'. Can't see it. Seems like cdn.memegenerator.net is down.

Well it said:

"You think Lilly is the worst girl, I get that, but you're wrong and I hate you."

[Popo]

Act 3, Part 12 has entered the building.

It's the legit ending of Act 3 this time, we swear. We hope you got a kick out of our prank, but this release is decidedly a return to form.

[Dippeggs]

Act 3, Part 12 has entered the building.

It's the legit ending of Act 3 this time, we swear. We hope you got a kick out of our prank, but this release is decidedly a return to form.

I bet Junichi's drawing looked like this



But in all seriousness good chapter. Short but sweet.

[DietKane]

We don't like to keep you guys waiting for too long.

Here's the first chapter of Act 4. Hope you enjoy it (and I hope you like Junichi/Hanako chapters)!

[Dippeggs]

We don't like to keep you guys waiting for too long.

Here's the first chapter of Act 4. Hope you enjoy it (and I hope you like Junichi/Hanako chapters)!

Oh god, the very first page.

You made my day.

[Popo]

Oh god, the very first page.

You made my day.

We aim to please.

And on that note, Act 4, Part 02 is ready for reading.

This is our longest release yet, for those who're counting. We chronicle a day as near and dear to my heart as any non-fictional one I've experienced.

[naxxar]

That was brilliant. I smiled the whole way through that chapter

[Jylr]

Yeah! Birthday update, kinda one day late on my birthday post, but great!
I feel like a noob for asking, but can you see other comments on discussion, if so , how?

[DietKane]

Yeah! Birthday update, kinda one day late on my birthday post, but great!
I feel like a noob for asking, but can you see other comments on discussion, if so , how?

Do you mean comments placed on the chapters through Google Docs? Those usually show up on the document where they were placed for us, but we haven't really had anyone leave comments since the first 2 chapters.

[Popo]

Yeah! Birthday update, kinda one day late on my birthday post, but great!
I feel like a noob for asking, but can you see other comments on discussion, if so , how?

We wish you a happy birthday and a great year of life ahead. We can see comments posted on the documents themselves, and you can even highlight specific text as being in regards to your comment.

[Jylr]

We wish you a happy birthday and a great year of life ahead. We can see comments posted on the documents themselves, and you can even highlight specific text as being in regards to your comment.

Thanks both for the reply and birthday acknowledgment. I found it after using both your comments and some common sense!

...we haven't really had anyone leave comments since the first 2 chapters.

Guess whose gonna start commenting?

[Popo]

Haha, cool. We value feedback.

[fluffy_pink]

Currently working through act 2 of your story, and I'm loving it. I particularly like your Rin. I hope she gets to play a bigger part later. I don't have any criticism of note just yet, just want to say thanks and keep up the good work! I'll report back if I have any comments once I'm finished.

[Popo]

Currently working through act 2 of your story, and I'm loving it. I particularly like your Rin. I hope she gets to play a bigger part later. I don't have any criticism of note just yet, just want to say thanks and keep up the good work! I'll report back if I have any comments once I'm finished.

Thank you for your sentiments, and thanks for reading. As for Rin, she's kind of a side-character among the main cast, if you will, which is a step up from true side-characters like Mutou, Kenji, Yuuko, etc. Characters like Lilly and Misha get a lot of limelight for being very closely tied to the lead cast of KA, and another character has a reason for drawing closer, while Rin and Emi show up a little more sporadically and do things on their own schedules, but we tried to give all the "Shoujos" some interesting and even some intense moments, and have 'em show up if we feel like they've been absent too long. They get the spotlight shone on them every so often, as well. Since Rin often wanders around and finds herself in unlikely places, and Emi sometimes sees people walking through the school grounds from the track, there's a lot of opportunities for them to show up, even if the plot usually centers around the other characters.