Thoughts on the H-scenes?

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ArcCain wrote:
YZQ wrote:Also, the famous Ann Sullivan-Helen Keller way.
I don´t know of this, what do you mean?

I am just saying that Lilly and Emi would be the kind of people wanting a round 2.
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pandaphil wrote:Maybe its just me, but it seemed like most of the art during the H-scenes took a nosedive in quality. Like the artist wasn't comfortable with what they were doing.
I wouldn't say nosedive, but now that you mention it i do think i remember some of the nude CGs felt a little differently... It might just be bad memory though.

And no offense but "Like the artist wasn't comfortable with what they were doing." is pretty hilarious.
Well, maybe a bad choice of words, but when I saw them it just felt like they were rushed, or the artist just wanted to get them done and over with. Quite honestly, if it were the artist, I'd have gone into quite loving detail on those scenes.
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I think it looks good, all though... What´s up with her back?
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anyone else notice the lotion and tissues next to her clock
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Eraser35 wrote:anyone else notice the lotion and tissues next to her clock
Well yeah, but you expect to see those things in a girls room. Now in a guys room it'd be suspicious. Especially next to the computer. :)
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pandaphil wrote:
Eraser35 wrote:anyone else notice the lotion and tissues next to her clock
Well yeah, but you expect to see those things in a girls room. Now in a guys room it'd be suspicious. Especially next to the computer. :)
Maybe she has a clock fetish.

Also, an earlier question by ArcCain: I think that's a strand of hair. Or her hip, if I'm looking at the wrong thing.
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Umber wrote:
pandaphil wrote:
Eraser35 wrote:anyone else notice the lotion and tissues next to her clock
Well yeah, but you expect to see those things in a girls room. Now in a guys room it'd be suspicious. Especially next to the computer. :)
Maybe she has a clock fetish.

Also, an earlier question by ArcCain: I think that's a strand of hair. Or her hip, if I'm looking at the wrong thing.

Yeah, I think he probably means the way the line of her back goes all wavy. Like a scanner error or something.

I've gone back and looked at some of the H art and I was probably a bit too harsh. Yeah, Lilly has toothpicky legs, but these are meant to be realistic girls. So they're not going to have perfect anime proportions.

Still think Emi's head looks odd in this one though.
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pandaphil wrote: Still think Emi's head looks odd in this one though.
To me, it's...below her right cheek. Whatever that part of the face's called. It seems a little chubby, for lack of a better term, when I twist my laptop ninety degrees to the left.

Like it's swollen, or she's smushing on some hard candy in there.
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the tissues aren't there in that picture, I suppose Emi and Hisao cleaned up afterwards
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About the tissues, girls sometimes like to wipe afterwards.

And yeah, I think it is supposed to be her hip but it looks odd.
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ArcCain wrote:About the tissues, girls sometimes like to wipe afterwards.

And yeah, I think it is supposed to be her hip but it looks odd.
It's Emi's fat rolls. She ate cake in the middle of the night after Hisao fell asleep and it went straight to her hips.
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The only thing that really bothers me there is Hisao temporarily taking the role of Typical Eyeless hentai protagonist.
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Oddball wrote:The only thing that really bothers me there is Hisao temporarily taking the role of Typical Eyeless hentai protagonist.
Can NEVER unsee. Thank you Oddball.
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Oddball wrote:The only thing that really bothers me there is Hisao temporarily taking the role of Typical Eyeless hentai protagonist.
That actually stuck with me as well.
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Oddball wrote:The only thing that really bothers me there is Hisao temporarily taking the role of Typical Eyeless hentai protagonist.
Can NEVER unsee. Thank you Oddball.
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