A Song About Hanako's path.

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A Song About Hanako's path.

Post by Gelastic » Tue Mar 27, 2012 12:48 am

Whenever I'm bored, I sing softly and improvise random lyrics that somewhat rhyme according to what's on my mind. In a sort of comedic but serious way (if that makes sense), I wrote a little song about Hanako's path from Hisao's perspective. Here we go, I guess.

I had a heart attack, I hardly looked back.
Dreaded my days in the hospital, I met a girl with no optical.
Her friend was scarred, her house was charred.
I wanted to help, but I could only yelp.
We met in the library, she thought I was scary.
I startled her, she startled me too, when she yelled out "I'vegotsomethingtodo!"
I became her friend, I didn't want this to end.
We played lots of chess, it relieved her of stress.
We drank lots of tea, she hung out more with me.
She told me her story, there was no glory.
Her parents are dead, and I hold her head.
I gave her some chocolate, it was in my pocket (Hehe).
We slept together in bed, I still hold her head.
She's better now, I tell her how...
I love her.

Well, there it is. I tried to remember as many references as I could. I probably should have included Lilly more in it, but whatever.

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Re: A Song About Hanako's path.

Post by Ax Maverick » Wed Mar 28, 2012 9:04 pm

Aww, such a cute song~! I was singing while reading, hehe xD
"Stop telling me not to worry about you! Just this once... Let me cry..."


"I fell in love with you, and I refuse to let that be thrown away, just because you're afraid to lose me."

"Why are you doing this? Why can't you just leave me alone?"

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Re: A Song About Hanako's path.

Post by youka » Fri Mar 30, 2012 3:50 pm

haha, good stuff :mrgreen: well done
Hanako Dash - what REAL MEN do when they're bored: http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=3&t=5547 :D
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Re: A Song About Hanako's path.

Post by MasterJHG » Sun May 13, 2012 3:16 am

Her bad ending was great....well in the way that a bad ending shuold be.

Her normal ending was someting like...f*ck Hisao what the hell are you doing.

And her Best ending was.....was.....perfect.....not to be a long route the be the best for me

well for now....igottadosometing

if she needs a prince, then I will be that prince

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Re: A Song About Hanako's path.

Post by Some Dude » Mon Jul 16, 2012 11:34 am

I feel like, for completions sake, I should get the other endings for her... but, that ending was just perfect and I don't want to see it any different. I love you Hanako.

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