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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2011 8:02 pm
by Worthington
All these puns are going to give me a heart attack.

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2011 10:33 pm
by griffon8
Worthington wrote:All these puns are going to give me a heart attack.
Man, didn't see that coming.

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Wed Nov 16, 2011 10:35 pm
by Anonymous Coward
Silentcook wrote:Latest wordcount clocked in at more than 485 thousands ... Fate/Stay Night is ~800,000 words and Clannad is ~600,000 words.
To be fair, FSN did not suffer from a shortage of words.

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2011 3:25 am
by OneMore
Anonymous Coward wrote:To be fair, FSN did not suffer from a shortage of words.
Although it had 3 routes, while KS has 5.

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2011 6:50 am
by Limbless
OneMore wrote:
Anonymous Coward wrote:To be fair, FSN did not suffer from a shortage of words.
Although it had 3 routes, while KS has 5.
Three very, very long routes, though... Personally I got sick of it for a LONG time just after doing one.

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2011 8:07 am
by Guest
I can't say I agree with this cat ears/air ducts thing. It's striking, and at the same time, overdone in anime. Its strikingness only magnifies how overdone it is.

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2011 10:10 am
by blah
I love the hair intakes! Antenna are overdone, but the hair intakes haven't been ruined for me yet.

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2011 7:34 pm
by ElisaMasah
Anonymous Coward wrote:
Silentcook wrote:Latest wordcount clocked in at more than 485 thousands ... Fate/Stay Night is ~800,000 words and Clannad is ~600,000 words.
To be fair, FSN did not suffer from a shortage of words.
It was Kotomine without Him FSN word count will be at least halved.
I do really hope no one in KS will ever ... EVER talk so much.

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2011 10:02 pm
by Peorth
ElisaMasah wrote:
Anonymous Coward wrote:
Silentcook wrote:Latest wordcount clocked in at more than 485 thousands ... Fate/Stay Night is ~800,000 words and Clannad is ~600,000 words.
To be fair, FSN did not suffer from a shortage of words.
It was Kotomine without Him FSN word count will be at least halved.
I do really hope no one in KS will ever ... EVER talk so much.
Nasu's writing style in general is rather wordy.

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:25 am
by DMGnome
Peorth wrote:Nasu's writing style in general is rather wordy.
Yeah, Type Moon could use a good editor. They don't use one word when they can use twelve, and then add dashes and ellipses, and then repeat it all four times over.

"This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair!"

Or forty-four times over, as the case may be. Don't get me wrong, I love F/SN and Tsukihime, but the writing desperately needed some cuts.

Also, wooo! Shizune's done! Yes!

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 8:22 am
by Yukimi
DMGnome wrote:
Peorth wrote:Nasu's writing style in general is rather wordy.
Yeah, Type Moon could use a good editor. They don't use one word when they can use twelve, and then add dashes and ellipses, and then repeat it all four times over.

"This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair!"

Or forty-four times over, as the case may be. Don't get me wrong, I love F/SN and Tsukihime, but the writing desperately needed some cuts.

Also, wooo! Shizune's done! Yes!
Completely agree. I love reading and wordiness usually doesn't even scare me (Lord of the Rings, El Quijote, ...) but in a F/SN a breakfast could take half an hour reading... I still recommend it but wow if they could have used editing.

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:46 am
by Rohalmen509
Please not too much reading. This is coming from a guy that read the Inheritance novel in two days. On a bus. :P

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 2:55 pm
by Leon6991
Oh that's it... I'mma object like Phoenix here... the storyline in FSN was solid in story and Kotomine was a good antagonist!

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 3:39 pm
by Anonymous Coward
As for fighting the release rush, let's just say that I'd rather see a polished Valentine's release than a rushed Christmas release.

Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Posted: Fri Nov 18, 2011 6:24 pm
by Mirage_GSM
I'm going to go out on a limb and say that whatever kind of release we're going to see, it's not going to be rushed 8)