Shizune's Path Direction Complete

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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by Worthington » Wed Nov 16, 2011 8:02 pm

All these puns are going to give me a heart attack.
Got my feet in the air and my head on the ground.

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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by griffon8 » Wed Nov 16, 2011 10:33 pm

Worthington wrote:All these puns are going to give me a heart attack.
Man, didn't see that coming.
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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by Anonymous Coward » Wed Nov 16, 2011 10:35 pm

Silentcook wrote:Latest wordcount clocked in at more than 485 thousands ... Fate/Stay Night is ~800,000 words and Clannad is ~600,000 words.
To be fair, FSN did not suffer from a shortage of words.

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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by OneMore » Thu Nov 17, 2011 3:25 am

Anonymous Coward wrote:To be fair, FSN did not suffer from a shortage of words.
Although it had 3 routes, while KS has 5.

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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by Limbless » Thu Nov 17, 2011 6:50 am

OneMore wrote:
Anonymous Coward wrote:To be fair, FSN did not suffer from a shortage of words.
Although it had 3 routes, while KS has 5.
Three very, very long routes, though... Personally I got sick of it for a LONG time just after doing one.

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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by Guest » Thu Nov 17, 2011 8:07 am

I can't say I agree with this cat ears/air ducts thing. It's striking, and at the same time, overdone in anime. Its strikingness only magnifies how overdone it is.

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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by blah » Thu Nov 17, 2011 10:10 am

I love the hair intakes! Antenna are overdone, but the hair intakes haven't been ruined for me yet.

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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by ElisaMasah » Thu Nov 17, 2011 7:34 pm

Anonymous Coward wrote:
Silentcook wrote:Latest wordcount clocked in at more than 485 thousands ... Fate/Stay Night is ~800,000 words and Clannad is ~600,000 words.
To be fair, FSN did not suffer from a shortage of words.
It was Kotomine without Him FSN word count will be at least halved.
I do really hope no one in KS will ever ... EVER talk so much.
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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by Peorth » Thu Nov 17, 2011 10:02 pm

ElisaMasah wrote:
Anonymous Coward wrote:
Silentcook wrote:Latest wordcount clocked in at more than 485 thousands ... Fate/Stay Night is ~800,000 words and Clannad is ~600,000 words.
To be fair, FSN did not suffer from a shortage of words.
It was Kotomine without Him FSN word count will be at least halved.
I do really hope no one in KS will ever ... EVER talk so much.
Nasu's writing style in general is rather wordy.
Even if the author is silenced, the performance is stopped, the story will not end.

Whether it's a comedy or a tragedy, if there is cheering, the story will continue on.
Just like the many lives.
For the us who are still in it and still in the journey, send warm blessings.

---We will continue to walk down this path until eternity.

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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by DMGnome » Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:25 am

Peorth wrote:Nasu's writing style in general is rather wordy.
Yeah, Type Moon could use a good editor. They don't use one word when they can use twelve, and then add dashes and ellipses, and then repeat it all four times over.

"This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair!"

Or forty-four times over, as the case may be. Don't get me wrong, I love F/SN and Tsukihime, but the writing desperately needed some cuts.

Also, wooo! Shizune's done! Yes!
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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by Yukimi » Fri Nov 18, 2011 8:22 am

DMGnome wrote:
Peorth wrote:Nasu's writing style in general is rather wordy.
Yeah, Type Moon could use a good editor. They don't use one word when they can use twelve, and then add dashes and ellipses, and then repeat it all four times over.

"This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair. This chair!"

Or forty-four times over, as the case may be. Don't get me wrong, I love F/SN and Tsukihime, but the writing desperately needed some cuts.

Also, wooo! Shizune's done! Yes!
Completely agree. I love reading and wordiness usually doesn't even scare me (Lord of the Rings, El Quijote, ...) but in a F/SN a breakfast could take half an hour reading... I still recommend it but wow if they could have used editing.
Shizune=Akira > Lilly > Emi > Hanako > Rin (but all of them have a place in my heart and some other more interesting locations XP).

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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by Rohalmen509 » Fri Nov 18, 2011 11:46 am

Please not too much reading. This is coming from a guy that read the Inheritance novel in two days. On a bus. :P
I found out about KS from japanator, during Ero-week.

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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by Leon6991 » Fri Nov 18, 2011 2:55 pm

Oh that's it... I'mma object like Phoenix here... the storyline in FSN was solid in story and Kotomine was a good antagonist!

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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by Anonymous Coward » Fri Nov 18, 2011 3:39 pm

As for fighting the release rush, let's just say that I'd rather see a polished Valentine's release than a rushed Christmas release.

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Re: Shizune's Path Direction Complete

Post by Mirage_GSM » Fri Nov 18, 2011 6:24 pm

I'm going to go out on a limb and say that whatever kind of release we're going to see, it's not going to be rushed 8)
Emi > Misha > Hanako > Lilly > Rin > Shizune

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