Mutou Gets Fired

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Mutou Gets Fired

Post by Atario » Mon Nov 17, 2014 9:52 pm

Here's something I wrote for a one-shot contest (limit 2,000 words). It didn't win, but what the hey.
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Mutou Gets Fired — a little one-shot fanfic I wrote

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Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Post by d2r » Mon Nov 17, 2014 9:58 pm

Was he being fired from Yamaku, or somewhere he worked prior to his employment there? If it's Yamaku being defunded, you might want to go into that a bit more - plus, I mean, a school doesn't just fold up on short notice. They need to finish the year etc.
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Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Post by Atario » Mon Nov 17, 2014 10:14 pm

Didn't you read it? I thought it was pretty clear from context…
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Post by AntonSlavik020 » Mon Nov 17, 2014 11:01 pm

d2r wrote:Was he being fired from Yamaku, or somewhere he worked prior to his employment there? If it's Yamaku being defunded, you might want to go into that a bit more - plus, I mean, a school doesn't just fold up on short notice. They need to finish the year etc.
Judging by the fact that this takes place before the game, and Mutou mentions getting back into teaching, I thought it was pretty clear.
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Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Post by d2r » Tue Nov 18, 2014 5:06 am

It was late and I was tired. Now that I look at in the light of the morning, it is pretty obvious. :P
Comrade wrote:infinite options does not mean all options, just like that between every two numbers there are infinite numbers, but not all.

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Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Post by Atario » Tue Nov 18, 2014 5:47 am

You're forgiven :P
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Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Post by 81pi81 » Tue Nov 18, 2014 2:25 pm

Is it an online competition? Can you provide a link?

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Re: Mutou Gets Fired

Post by Atario » Wed Nov 19, 2014 6:29 am

[Observes soundless food preparation]

Well… ok, I guess I can't link it, after all. Yes, it is/was online; it's over now anyway.
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