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Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:08 am
by azumeow
Squee.

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2015 3:33 am
by bubeez
Th.... thank you? :D

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2015 11:44 am
by Gajzla
I liked this chapter, though kinda disappointed the nurse did not pick up on her finding his office by herself.

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:19 pm
by AntonSlavik020
Gajzla wrote:I liked this chapter, though kinda disappointed the nurse did not pick up on her finding his office by herself.
Yeah, I was looking forward to what he had to say about that too.

Anyways, I'm glad Seiki finally told Hisao she has amnesia. I'm not a big fan of people hiding their disability from their friends.

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:28 pm
by bubeez
Hmm... perhaps doctor-patient confidentiality? The Nurse wouldn't want Hisao knowing what he isn't supposed to know.

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Sun Mar 29, 2015 2:46 pm
by AntonSlavik020
bubeez wrote:Hmm... perhaps doctor-patient confidentiality? The Nurse wouldn't want Hisao knowing what he isn't supposed to know.
Didn't think about that. That actually makes sense.

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2015 3:32 am
by Solistor
azumeow wrote:Squee.
Seconded! This fic is just so adorable.

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2015 1:46 pm
by Steinherz
AntonSlavik020 wrote:
Gajzla wrote:I liked this chapter, though kinda disappointed the nurse did not pick up on her finding his office by herself.
Yeah, I was looking forward to what he had to say about that too.

Anyways, I'm glad Seiki finally told Hisao she has amnesia. I'm not a big fan of people hiding their disability from their friends.
Hisao in most routes that aren't Emi's? :lol:

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Mon Mar 30, 2015 7:23 pm
by bubeez
I'm going to try and make cover art soon. Although I'm afraid to crush all of your headcanons lol. I've been avoiding appearance for quite a while.

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Tue Mar 31, 2015 9:25 pm
by bubeez
Drew this to procrastinate lol. I really need to learn how to properly shade

http://i.imgur.com/BFWatOm.jpg

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Wed Apr 01, 2015 1:53 am
by HoneyBakedHam
I love the art there, especially the cheesy high-schools romance initials on the tree. :P

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2015 6:41 am
by nemz
Glad I found this fic, it's pretty cute!

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Thu Apr 02, 2015 12:14 pm
by bubeez
Thanks, it means a lot to hear that :D

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2015 10:15 pm
by griffon8
I guess it’s about time I comment on this.

Now that you’ve gotten this far, you’re showing talent. I didn’t like the choppy style at first, but it fits so well with your OC. Also, I think you’ve gotten better at it, finding a balance between abruptness and… progress? Not sure what I’m trying to convey with that thought. Anyway, it’s better.

One typo I noticed:
Dream-like, but so realistic its terrifyingly beautiful.
A rare one; usually people are guilty of putting in an apostrophe when they aren’t supposed to.

Re: Can You Remember Me? An Amnesiac Story

Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2015 4:18 am
by bubeez
Progress? I'll take it :) Thank you!

I've definitely conflicted with the writing style. There was a point in the story where I lost my footing. I lost faith in the fact that the reader could continue each chapter as if no time had passed since the last one, and I kept writing as if each chapter needed to be standalone... but that really breaks the abrupt writing style and Seiki's lofty-headed viewpoint.

So, dear readers. (it's been a while since I've called you all that!) Thanks for being patient with me. And I won't lose faith in you all. Next chapter soon!