Stop The Clock (Meiko)

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Hotkey
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Re: Stop The Clock (Meiko)

Post by Hotkey » Wed Jun 11, 2014 10:22 pm

Oddball wrote:to me it seemed like a comment on him focusing on her body since the line was directly comparing her form to the bottles. I saw it as him saying it was a bit too early to start getting into the pervy sexy stuff.
Ahhh... there's always some angle I don't see things from, that turns the situation into something I didn't expect :). When you put it that way, your interpretation does make sense.

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Steinherz
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Re: Stop The Clock (Meiko)

Post by Steinherz » Thu Jan 01, 2015 12:16 am

Okay, I hate necroing fics.
But good god, I need to say:
Kudos, well done. That was amazingly well-written


Also:
bhtooefr wrote:No foreplay, and it seems she didn't finish?
For shame, Hisao.
Hisao seemed to be kind of a dead fuck in the VN, so yeah :lol:
I write take a look, would you kindly?
I also draw, kind of.
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Oddball wrote:It's an obvious mistake. Both are disfigured orphans that read alot and both wear green skirts.

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