Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]

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HayStack44
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Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]

Post by HayStack44 » Sat Feb 08, 2014 8:26 pm

Just a little something I had saved for putting into my KS2 fic somewhere and reworked slightly for stand-alone status:

Graduation Day

Shizune’s taxi was waiting.

[Shicchan, before you go. You promised me~]

[Now? In front of the others?]

[Are you ashamed Shicchan? We won’t see anyone again. Come tomorrow no-one will care.]

[No! Of course I’m not....It's just....]

[Don't worry, I'll explain to them later.]

Shizune sighed and raised her hands in defeat.

[OK. Just one. And you better had explain to them first chance you get, you know I'll still never hear the end of this from Satou though.]

Misha beamed as she moved forward.

For Shizune the world went pink.

Lilly was confused. She heard Hanako gasp, Emi squeal and clap her hands. Even the normally unflappable Rin quietly went "Woah."

Still hopping up and down Emi caught Lilly's expression and whispered an explanation in her ear.

"Oh. Oh my." said Lilly. She decided to leave it at that.

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Re: Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]

Post by Mournful3ch0 » Sat Feb 08, 2014 8:43 pm

Wot.

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Good for Misha? Wahaha~?
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Re: Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]

Post by AntonSlavik020 » Sat Feb 08, 2014 9:30 pm

Kinda wish there was a bit more to this, there aren't alot of happy Shizune/Misha stories, but for what it is is works fine.
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Hanako>Lilly>Rin>Emi>Shizune

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Re: Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]

Post by Kitsune Spirit » Mon Feb 10, 2014 11:08 am

Implied yuri, nice. :)

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Re: Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]

Post by Frankyo » Mon Feb 10, 2014 3:05 pm

YES! YES! Over 9000 Wahahahas for you!
Girls: Hanako/Misha > Lilly > Emi > Shizune/Rin
Routes: I realized that every route has its own charms, but felt that Shizune's was lacklustre. It has Misha though!

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Re: Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]

Post by Kitsune Spirit » Mon Feb 10, 2014 3:26 pm

I also agree with Anton... needs more.

How about a happy alternate-yuri story between Misha and Shizune where Shicchan gets fed up with Generic VN Protagonist and decides that its really Misha thats shes loved for so long :3

Actually thought about that myself... also thought about doing the Emi route from Emi's pov (or at least part of it).

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Re: Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]

Post by AntonSlavik020 » Mon Feb 10, 2014 5:21 pm

Kitsune Spirit wrote: Actually thought about that myself... also thought about doing the Emi route from Emi's pov (or at least part of it).
I'd read it. I love stuff like that. Especially since the person doing "Hanako's story" isn't going to do the other routes.
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Re: Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]

Post by Helbereth » Mon Feb 10, 2014 5:40 pm

Kitsune Spirit wrote:How about a happy alternate-yuri story between Misha and Shizune where Shicchan gets fed up with Generic VN Protagonist and decides that its really Misha thats shes loved for so long :3
Why kick Hisao to the curb? Get all the girls together like a harem, except they're in charge and he's the slave.

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Re: Graduation Day [Shizune/Misha]

Post by HayStack44 » Mon Feb 10, 2014 7:19 pm

Thanks for the words folks, just to let you know that my KS2 adaption is still a thing, was looking what I've done so far for Chapter 3 just today and I have every intention of getting stuck back into it.

If you haven't seen it here's what's done so far.

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