Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated/New Art 5/26)

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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by carbinecorps » Wed Jun 24, 2015 12:41 am

:D :D Very engaging story so far! I think I love Saki's personality the most out of the other girls, or at least would be able to get along with her the best in real life.
Will you also be doing different endings for her based on different choices? Or will it just be one path?

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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by TheNexus97 » Wed Jun 24, 2015 3:21 am

I've always imagined Saki's good ending quite similar to Clannad After Story, when Nagisa dies and Tomoya is utterly distraught about it.
I played the same scene in my mind but with Saki and Hisao instead.

The feelz, man... :cry:
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by timetravelzero » Wed Jun 24, 2015 4:08 am

TheNexus97 wrote:I played the same scene but with Saki and Hisao instead.
No... you stop that. You go right back to Hell, you. Why would you give me that current-head-canon?!
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by Alpacalypse » Wed Jun 24, 2015 5:26 am

timetravelzero wrote:
TheNexus97 wrote:I played the same scene but with Saki and Hisao instead.
No... you stop that. You go right back to Hell, you. Why would you give me that current-head-canon?!
Because it's going to happen either way. Sorry to say it, but for any relationship with Saki, it's basically the best-case scenario (unless the other person dies at exactly the same time for some inexplicable reason).

Either way, somebody's going to have to live on without the other. Sad truth :cry:
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by rimvydasm » Wed Jun 24, 2015 9:28 am

i hope you're wrong about this,but i know it make sense,thats just how Saki is.i remember from another VN,where in the happy ending,one person dies after 5 years being together,it's sad he died,but it's still a happy ending,after all other person talk about this with her grandchild,and it in the end it's happy ending.i like this ending very much.
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by Eurobeatjester » Wed Jun 24, 2015 9:38 am

I don't intend to write branching paths.

As for the ending? It's about the journey, not the destination...
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by carbinecorps » Wed Jun 24, 2015 10:01 am

Totally understandable. You have a monumental task ahead of you after all. I'm excited to see where the story goes even though it will probably tear my heart out and smash it to pieces.

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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by HoneyBakedHam » Wed Jun 24, 2015 10:32 am

That's what KS is about: the feels.

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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by Eurobeatjester » Wed Jun 24, 2015 10:47 am

I do know how the story eventually ends. I hope you'll stick with me that long, and I hope I can do it well :)
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by HoneyBakedHam » Wed Jun 24, 2015 10:49 am

Eurobeatjester wrote:I do know how the story eventually ends. I hope you'll stick with me that long, and I hope I can do it well :)
Well, you're stuck with me, if that helps any. :P

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Post by swampie2 » Wed Jun 24, 2015 1:34 pm

Eurobeatjester wrote:I do know how the story eventually ends. I hope you'll stick with me that long, and I hope I can do it well :)
I'm enjoying it so far, Saki is a very interesting character.

Still looking forward to the next part!
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by Peorth » Wed Jun 24, 2015 6:43 pm

Eurobeatjester wrote:I do know how the story eventually ends. I hope you'll stick with me that long, and I hope I can do it well :)
Do keep going, I'm looking forward to the ride as well as the destination!
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by Blank Mage » Thu Jun 25, 2015 9:49 am

Eurobeatjester wrote:I do know how the story eventually ends. I hope you'll stick with me that long, and I hope I can do it well :)
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by FelOnyx » Thu Jun 25, 2015 9:02 pm

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Eurobeatjester wrote:I do know how the story eventually ends. I hope you'll stick with me that long, and I hope I can do it well :)
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 6/17)

Post by Eurobeatjester » Sat Jul 04, 2015 1:03 am

New commission being worked on for a faraway chapter, so when it gets done I'll post it before I write it. I think you all will like it, if it comes out the way I'm hoping :D

Also, hitting a bit of a writing block with the next chapter. I'm trying to strike a balance between Linkin Park way-too-melodramatic and Mary Sue, and after a few rewrites I'm not quite there yet.
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