Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 11/28)

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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 3/29)

Post by forgetmenot » Fri Apr 17, 2015 12:33 pm

Feurox wrote:
Eurobeatjester wrote:
Blank Mage wrote:And now for part two of our ongoing saga, 'Blank Reads All the Things'. It's an ambitious project.

I can't say I've heard much about this (or indeed any) Saki route, but a quick read of your Rika/Saki short proves that your writing is absolutely worth a look. I'm sure I'll have a more in depth opinion very shortly!
I think you have me confused with forgetmenot. He was the one who wrote that piece :)

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Oh and aside from shitting up your thread, I like where you're going with this. One of those fics that I have on my, 'keep an eye on' list.
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 3/29)

Post by Blank Mage » Sun Apr 19, 2015 3:30 am

forgetmenot wrote:ಠ_ಠ
I have no idea what you're talking about haha shut up.

I'm caught up! I worry that this injury heralds the start of some real drama, perhaps some darker tones for our cane-wielding heroine. Interesting point you make about the stigma of not having a stigma. Normality is relative, as I like to say. I hope we see more of Chi and Nori, I've come to like them almost as much as Saki herself.
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 3/29)

Post by Parzival » Mon May 04, 2015 7:33 pm

Wow, found and read this fic in the last week. Really liking it so far, Saki in particular is very well written.
Eagerly awaiting more! :mrgreen:
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 3/29)

Post by Eurobeatjester » Tue May 05, 2015 11:34 pm

Thanks guys :)

Work on the next chapter is progressing, but I have a convention in a few weeks I'm prepping for and the writer's block on this next chapter is a bear. Everytime I sit down to write it all just goes out of my head instead of through my fingers to the keyboard :lol:

I will be getting it done though, no worries :)
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 3/29)

Post by TheNexus97 » Fri May 08, 2015 7:52 pm

Best Saki Fanfic I've read so far, keep at it! :D

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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (Updated 3/29)

Post by Blank Mage » Fri May 08, 2015 8:12 pm

TheNexus97 wrote:Best Saki Fanfic I've read so far, keep at it! :D
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New artwork 5/15)

Post by Eurobeatjester » Fri May 15, 2015 6:32 pm

I love rtil so much :D

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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New artwork 5/15)

Post by azumeow » Fri May 15, 2015 7:32 pm

No giant Hisao schlongs- 7.8/10

I am disappoint.

But seriously, god bless rtil. Such an artist.
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New artwork 5/15)

Post by Eurobeatjester » Fri May 15, 2015 9:06 pm

azumeow wrote:No giant Hisao schlongs- 7.8/10

I am disappoint.

But seriously, god bless rtil. Such an artist.
Ifwhen I approach him for a hentai piece, I'll request it to be the size of her leg.
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New artwork 5/15)

Post by Steinherz » Sat May 16, 2015 12:12 am

Eurobeatjester wrote:
azumeow wrote:No giant Hisao schlongs- 7.8/10

I am disappoint.

But seriously, god bless rtil. Such an artist.
Ifwhen I approach him for a hentai piece, I'll request it to be the size of her leg.
Kind of like how the recent lewd Rtil shimmie updates have been? -shot-
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New artwork 5/15)

Post by azumeow » Sat May 16, 2015 10:47 am

Eurobeatjester wrote:
azumeow wrote:No giant Hisao schlongs- 7.8/10

I am disappoint.

But seriously, god bless rtil. Such an artist.
Ifwhen I approach him for a hentai piece, I'll request it to be the size of her leg.
I humbly thank you.
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Your paradise is something I’ve endured
See I don’t think I can fight this anymore, I’m listening with one foot out the door
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New artwork 5/15)

Post by EMMSixteenA4 » Fri May 29, 2015 1:38 pm

Wow, this is some fine work! Katawa Shoujo is such a great vector for fanfics to spur off of, with its extraordinary setting and all. This is just a great example of one. It looks like you're taking your time with the chapters, not to mention you're busy, I'm sure, but that's the way to go about it, slow and steady. Just. . . as long as it doesn't die, eheheh. Unless that's your plan, to convey the 'mortality' you seek by ending up halfway with a deadfic? Nah. I'm kidding. Anyway, I'm new to the forums so I just thought I'd drop some well-deserved words of praise your way. I'll be keeping a very close eye on this route, it's really promising. Keep it up! :D
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New artwork 5/15)

Post by timetravelzero » Fri May 29, 2015 2:39 pm

EMMSixteenA4 wrote: I'm new to the forums
Welcome to the madhouse, buddy. It's great, padded walls and everything. This is far and away one of the better fics-in-progress at the moment. And like you, I hope to see more soon.
Akira>Lilly=Shizune>Emi>Hanako>Mutou=Nurse>Saki>Misha=Rika>Yuuko>Meiko=Miki>Suzu>Kenji>Rin=Iwanako>Jigoro>Nomiya>{POWERGAP}>Hisao Eh, my opinion anyway

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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New artwork 5/15)

Post by Eurobeatjester » Fri May 29, 2015 3:29 pm

My goal is to have it finished next week. Conventions are insane!
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Re: Learning To Fly - A Saki pseudo-route (New artwork 5/15)

Post by Alpacalypse » Fri May 29, 2015 5:36 pm

Eurobeatjester wrote:My goal is to have it finished next week.
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Hypehypehypehypehype!
No pressure or anything :twisted:
But seriously, take your time, I'd hate to see the story go downhill in quality

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