the only question i would have for you is--what drives your character of saki? this is something you should really have in mind, and if you've really planned it out for months, it should be as concrete as a cinder-block. for now, i think you're doing just fine. just be careful to keep a character like saki on direction. it's very easy to deviate with such good material around.
if you haven't read it, this is my favorite piece of saki fan-fiction.
good work and looking forward to the next installment.
Thanks! As someone who has written for her before, I enjoy the kind words from you.
When I had the idea for this come to me a few months ago, I had a very basic concept of her character and what I wanted to do with it/where I wanted it to go. I wrote a ton of short blurbs to see what worked, and what didn't, and scrapped a bunch of it. I know from experience that I can easily write myself into corners if I don't clearly define a character.
In that aspect, once again, the Dramatica software has been incredible. It asks and helps define aspects about characters you would never even think of, until you write yourself into that aforementioned corner.
While the minute details may change, I have a very strong idea of who she is, what drives her, and how she got that way. I just hope I can do it justice