Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13

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Re: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13

Post by AnathRaema » Tue Dec 10, 2013 1:38 am

Silentcook wrote:It's definitely a Britishism and therefore it's all Shakespeare's fault
Yes, just blame Shakespeare. Always blame Shakespeare. Even if it's not Shakespeare's fault, BLAME HIM ANYWAY! It's more fun that way.
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Re: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13

Post by Kyler Thatch » Tue Dec 10, 2013 4:36 am

Feurox wrote:The class passes rather uneventfully, with Mutou writing up some simple questions which I finish quickly. Leaving me to stare out the window blankly, my eyelids growing heavier.
Overuse of words that end in -ly, I think. (Also, that second sentence sounds awkwardly phrased.)

Unexplained lack of Miki was kind of unexpected, but it's no big deal.

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Re: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13

Post by Mirage_GSM » Tue Dec 10, 2013 9:46 am

I'm not quite sure why the lack of Miki should be explained^^°
The story is also lacking in Ritsu, Naomi, Ikuno and most others of class 3-3. Why should they all be present for lunch?
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Re: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13

Post by Kyler Thatch » Tue Dec 10, 2013 9:58 am

Quite possibly an inaccurate extrapolation on my part, after he mentioned Taro working at the Beijing. My mistake.

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Re: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13

Post by Feurox » Tue Dec 10, 2013 4:43 pm

Unexplained lack of Miki was kind of unexpected, but it's no big deal.
Think Mirage answered that for me so thanks :D Pahah :D Though I can see the confusion, Miki x Suzu is pretty much accepted now XD

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Re: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13

Post by Maradar » Wed Dec 11, 2013 9:31 pm

I'm excited to see where this goes! It's pretty interesting so far, but Suzu seems a little OOC from her pseudo-route.
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Re: Precipitation- A Molly Pseudo Route . Update 8/12/13

Post by Mirage_GSM » Thu Dec 12, 2013 5:45 am

And that is a good thing!
First of all, her character in Scissorlips's story is not canon, so if any author wants to write a Suzu story how they picture her theat's perfectly fine.
Secondly, let's be honest, Suzu's character in that route had problems, both with the way her narcolepsy was depicted and in that she was excessively mopey and depressed. I'm glad that Feurox is not simply copying that Suzu.
Emi > Misha > Hanako > Lilly > Rin > Shizune

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griffon8 wrote:Kosher, just because sex is your answer to everything doesn't mean that sex is the answer to everything.
Sore wa himitsu desu.

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