Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]

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Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]

Post by pandaphil » Wed Mar 20, 2013 3:27 pm

Silentcook wrote:I TRIED to stay the fuck away, but you people made me do it.

Well thats pretty....impressive.

I don't know. With my own feeble writing skills on display here, I just don't feel that I have room to criticize other peoples work.
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Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]

Post by Helbereth » Wed Mar 20, 2013 4:47 pm

pandaphil wrote:
Silentcook wrote:I TRIED to stay the fuck away, but you people made me do it.

Well thats pretty....impressive.

I don't know. With my own feeble writing skills on display here, I just don't feel that I have room to criticize other peoples work.
You may feel that way, but, in a community such as this, filled with amateurs, the most useful thing you can probably offer, other than additional works to critique, is insight into those presented by your peers.

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Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]

Post by Oddball » Wed Mar 20, 2013 5:50 pm

Florentine wrote:
Oddball wrote:As long as we're throwing out links, I'd also suggest reading Fenimore Cooper's Literary Offenses written by Mark Twain
Never read his books, so I cannot comprehend with what it was analyzing about :(
If nothing else, the basic rules he talks about there should be useful to you.
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Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]

Post by forgetmenot » Wed Mar 20, 2013 6:02 pm

I'd like to offer one of my own more frequently used writing resources; namely, Kurt Vonnegut's 8 Simple Rules for Writing Fiction.

I'd also like to point out that it's not only important to know the rules, but also to know the proper place and time to break them. Suspense is a good thing, sometimes. Good things can happen to good people in the correct circumstances. Et cetera, et cetera.

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Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]

Post by Florentine » Wed Mar 20, 2013 8:42 pm

So many caring members....I do not even know how to speak my gratitude anymore :shock:

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Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]

Post by Helbereth » Thu Mar 21, 2013 2:32 am

Florentine wrote:So many caring members....I do not even know how to speak my gratitude anymore :shock:
Derision, sarcasm and insults seem to be the most common responses, but I may only be speaking from personal experience.

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Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]

Post by DanjaDoom » Thu Mar 21, 2013 12:20 pm

Helbereth wrote:
Florentine wrote:So many caring members....I do not even know how to speak my gratitude anymore :shock:
Derision, sarcasm and insults seem to be the most common responses, but I may only be speaking from personal experience.
*hit Helbereth with chair*

I just told him I like his shirt.
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Re: Hanako and Lilly having sex [Warning: Pure Yuri]

Post by Helbereth » Sat Mar 23, 2013 8:31 am

DanjaDoom wrote:
Helbereth wrote:
Florentine wrote:So many caring members....I do not even know how to speak my gratitude anymore :shock:
Derision, sarcasm and insults seem to be the most common responses, but I may only be speaking from personal experience.
*hit Helbereth with chair*

I just told him I like his shirt.
*punches DanjaDoom in the arm, then head-butts him into the wall*

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