Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}

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Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}

Post by ArcCain » Tue Apr 02, 2013 2:38 pm

Nicely done, sex in fiction is okay as long as you are mature about it, this works. :)

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Reading this made me picture it something like this:
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Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1} (erotic content ahea

Post by Steinherz » Wed Apr 03, 2013 7:20 pm

YZQ wrote:
Umber wrote:
YZQ wrote:Well, I see that they have not utilised tools yet. That will be fixed, hopefully.
By tools, you mean sexual objects?

What would a slashfic do without them? Ha, ha.
Yeap. Sex toys and whatever you and Stein have in mind.

You got co-opted in after Stein felt that all the credit was going to him. I'm no critic of sex scenes, so I'm ok any way.
Well Umber kind of got co-opted when I asked if she felt like proofreading/editing the fic.
And Sex toys? *whistles nonchalantly holding up a sign saying "Not this scene, but later on"* :P
ArcCain wrote:Nicely done, sex in fiction is okay as long as you are mature about it, this works. :)

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Reading this made me picture it something like this:
I'm mature when it comes to writing sex scenes, if it's supposed to be done so. If that makes sense.
Also that pic?
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Post by YZQ » Wed Apr 03, 2013 7:32 pm

Don't forget the groin kick...
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Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1} (erotic content ahea

Post by griffon8 » Wed Apr 03, 2013 10:33 pm

Steinherz wrote:I'm mature when it comes to writing sex scenes, if it's supposed to be done so. If that makes sense.
Also that pic?
[img]FUKKEN_SAVED[/img]
Just, damn.
Ha! Just noticed those two are sharing pocky.
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Post by ArcCain » Thu Apr 04, 2013 4:48 am

Would any one know if this comes from a series?
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Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}

Post by Steinherz » Fri Apr 05, 2013 1:06 pm

Well I guess I should inform the readers of this:
This fic is currently on a (minimum) 2-week hiatus/break/whateverthefuckyouwannacallit. As the proof-reader/editor (our glorious friend Umber) is on vacation. and as Umber is currently editing the second half of scene 5, yeah.
Just letting you all know.
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Post by KeiichiO » Fri Apr 05, 2013 1:46 pm

Finally made the time to read the latest chapter;

Goddamn, it had me flustered and blushing the entire read. Very nice. Seriously. Lost for words right now. Perfection? Yeah. Sounds about right.

GAH, It was beautiful!!

You've done it again, Steinherz The Great and Umber The Magnificent. You've created a masterpiece. I absolutely adore your writing style. Please, keep it up. I'll be patiently awaiting the next part of the story. Oh, and enjoy your trip Umber! (I can't say that enough. :mrgreen:)
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Post by Carighan » Sun May 05, 2013 3:40 pm

Will we see more of this soon? :D
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Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}

Post by Umber » Sun May 05, 2013 6:22 pm

Carighan wrote:Will we see more of this soon? :D
Yes.

Unfortunately, life (education, family, my own fanfiction) has been getting in the way of the next section of Exceeder. It didn't help that I was forced to depart for two weeks without internet a while ago.

While Stein's been putting work into Painless, Scarred, and the Broken Heart, I've been trying to find the time to do my edits to Exceeder's next chapter. Expect it this or next week.
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Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}

Post by Steinherz » Sun May 05, 2013 6:28 pm

Umber wrote:While Stein's been putting work into Painless, Scarred, and the Broken Heart, I've been trying to find the time to do my edits to Exceeder's next chapter. Expect it this or next week.
Or if our previous "expect it by this or next week" is anything to go by, two weeks to a month from now :lol:
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Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}

Post by Umber » Sun May 05, 2013 6:32 pm

Steinherz wrote:
Umber wrote:While Stein's been putting work into Painless, Scarred, and the Broken Heart, I've been trying to find the time to do my edits to Exceeder's next chapter. Expect it this or next week.
Or if our previous "expect it by this or next week" is anything to go by, two weeks to a month from now :lol:
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Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}

Post by Steinherz » Sun May 05, 2013 6:34 pm

Umber wrote:
Steinherz wrote:
Umber wrote:While Stein's been putting work into Painless, Scarred, and the Broken Heart, I've been trying to find the time to do my edits to Exceeder's next chapter. Expect it this or next week.
Or if our previous "expect it by this or next week" is anything to go by, two weeks to a month from now :lol:
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Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}

Post by Carighan » Sun May 05, 2013 6:49 pm

Bonus points for a frustrated Kuroko! :D

And yay, new episode soon. No worries, I understand life gets in the way. I just figured I'll ask in case it got cancelled or something. :)
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Post by Steinherz » Sun May 05, 2013 6:53 pm

Carighan wrote:Bonus points for a frustrated Kuroko! :D

And yay, new episode soon. No worries, I understand life gets in the way. I just figured I'll ask in case it got cancelled or something. :)
I have the worst case of procrastination. XD
None of my fics will ever be considered "cancelled" unless I specifically say so :lol:
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Re: Exceeder (Miki X Emi) {Updated 4/1}

Post by YZQ » Mon May 06, 2013 1:45 am

Take your time.
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