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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by Mader Levap » Thu Aug 22, 2013 5:48 am

Finally. :)
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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by Mirage_GSM » Thu Aug 22, 2013 9:47 am

Glad to see this continue.
A few comments - as usually nothing major:
I would always take my violin over to her house and we'd play together
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I remember their maid chastising us for playing after nine thirty.
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"So you had a maid?"
I'm not sure how Hisao arrives at this conclusion...
"Hisao. You are Japanese, for crying out loud. Show a little national pride."
I've found Japanese wasabi to be quite harmless compared to the stuff we get here.
I think there's a pretty large fish market somewhere in the city...
And you have to get up at four in the morning^^° I decided to pass on that.

The trip from Sendai to Tokyo is only about 300km. It would hardly take all night even on a scenic train.
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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by Leaty » Fri Aug 23, 2013 1:30 pm

Mirage_GSM wrote:The trip from Sendai to Tokyo is only about 300km. It would hardly take all night even on a scenic train.
I calculated this for my own purposes a little while ago. From Sendai Station on the Tohoku Shinkansen line, it's going to be a two hour trip straight to Tokyo, then at Shinagawa you would change to a different line (for Shibuya, you'd take the Yamanote line.) It wouldn't even take a whole morning.

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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by Maradar » Sat Aug 24, 2013 12:14 am

Well played :) I like your writing style. I keep getting caught up into this story. Keep up the good work :)
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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by Shail » Sun Aug 25, 2013 4:31 pm

Finally got around to reading this, looking forward to future updates :D will bookmark.


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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by azahk101 » Sun Sep 15, 2013 3:10 am

Man, I think I read through everything you've posted so far on this Kagami pseudo-route in just a couple days. It's just that good! I just want you to know you're definitely good at this, and I'm gonna be waiting ferverously for each and every update from now on.

Oh also, I appreciated what I think is a guns n roses reference with the title of the latest chapter here. I immediately started humming Night Train to myself, brought back good memories. Anyways, I love what you've done so far with the story and I hope you can ride it through to the end!

oh...also your music is absolutely beautiful. I'm a semi pianist and it just warms my heart to hear something so beautiful. Man Katawa Shoujo has gotten me way too emotional

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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by forgetmenot » Sun Sep 15, 2013 10:44 am

azahk101 wrote:Man, I think I read through everything you've posted so far on this Kagami pseudo-route in just a couple days. It's just that good! I just want you to know you're definitely good at this, and I'm gonna be waiting ferverously for each and every update from now on.
Wow, thanks so much! I can't apologize enough for the lack of updates recently, but I commute 3 hours daily and I'm gearing up for a cross-country move in the next month, so writing time is scarce these days. I'll definitely finish this though, however much time it'll take.
azahk101 wrote:Oh also, I appreciated what I think is a guns n roses reference with the title of the latest chapter here. I immediately started humming Night Train to myself, brought back good memories.
Glad someone caught it! This was one of the few chapters that was easy to name.

Night Traaaaaiiiinnnn
oh...also your music is absolutely beautiful. I'm a semi pianist and it just warms my heart to hear something so beautiful. Man Katawa Shoujo has gotten me way too emotional
Thanks again. I honestly didn't expect the music to be very well-received, so to hear this is really great. Stay tuned for future updates! I promise they're coming.

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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by azahk101 » Sun Sep 15, 2013 1:19 pm

forgetmenot wrote:I can't apologize enough for the lack of updates recently, but I commute 3 hours daily and I'm gearing up for a cross-country move in the next month, so writing time is scarce these days. I'll definitely finish this though, however much time it'll take.
Well say no more! I think all of us readers can understand why you haven't been able to update too quickly, so there's no need to apologize. Your life comes first; Kagami's comes second!

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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by Maradar » Sat Sep 21, 2013 8:26 pm

forgetmenot wrote: Wow, thanks so much! I can't apologize enough for the lack of updates recently, but I commute 3 hours daily and I'm gearing up for a cross-country move in the next month, so writing time is scarce these days. I'll definitely finish this though, however much time it'll take.
This is definitely worth the wait, continue doing what you do and good luck in your move!
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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by Technomancer » Wed Oct 23, 2013 10:07 pm

Ok, first off.
I love this fic. It's just great, original writing. What ever you're doing, don't stop.
On to my main point. I've turned this into an e-book (whats written so far, anyway) for my personal use, and was wondering if forgetmenot would be ok with me sharing it here! (with all credit to forgetmenot, of course)
I dunno if anyone's even interested in it, but I thought id ask anyways, just in case
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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by forgetmenot » Thu Oct 24, 2013 1:55 am

Technomancer wrote:On to my main point. I've turned this into an e-book (whats written so far, anyway) for my personal use, and was wondering if forgetmenot would be ok with me sharing it here! (with all credit to forgetmenot, of course)
I dunno if anyone's even interested in it, but I thought id ask anyways, just in case
Holy moly really? That's awesome. Yeah if anyone wants to read it in ebook format you have my full permission to go ahead and post a link. I'll add it to the top post.

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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by Jaspirian » Thu Oct 24, 2013 3:48 am

In chapter 8, Kenji knows Hisao's heart problem. How?

In 17, there is this passage:
Why did Ito went into such a long-winded explanation about Shostakovich?
It should read "Ito go".

Hypothetically speaking, would you give permission for an OC to have been pre-cataclysm friends with Kagami?

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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by Technomancer » Wed Oct 30, 2013 1:13 am

Apologies for the delayed reply, life kinda caught up with me...
Right, the only issue is that there are some spacing issues on some devices, but nothing to major. (also, I don't have a cover photo for it, so if anyone has anything, inbox me and i'll update it.)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/0rkcug7k715x95i/Memory.mobi
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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by forgetmenot » Wed Oct 30, 2013 12:35 pm

Technomancer wrote:Apologies for the delayed reply, life kinda caught up with me...
Right, the only issue is that there are some spacing issues on some devices, but nothing to major. (also, I don't have a cover photo for it, so if anyone has anything, inbox me and i'll update it.)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/0rkcug7k715x95i/Memory.mobi
This is crazy awesome. You're the best. I have added it to the top post.
Jaspirian wrote:In chapter 8, Kenji knows Hisao's heart problem. How?
Uhh...

uhh...

whoops.
In 17, there is this passage:
Why did Ito went into such a long-winded explanation about Shostakovich?
It should read "Ito go".
Fixed. Thanks for pointing those out.
Hypothetically speaking, would you give permission for an OC to have been pre-cataclysm friends with Kagami?
Consider anything/anyone I write free game. I'd appreciate it if you at least mentioned me in a header or footnotes or something, but it's not like I'm gonna do anything if you don't. You have my blessing. :)

Progress update: Sorry for the long wait, guys. I realize it's been over two months since I've posted a chapter. :( The good news is that I got some writing done today, which is more than I've done in a while. Hopefully I can get back into the swing of things and begin regular updates once again. I will finish this!

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Re: Kagami Pseudo-Route [Updated 8/22]

Post by Jaspirian » Wed Oct 30, 2013 10:13 pm

It would most certainly credit you. Thank you for the blessing.
Glad I could help on the errors.

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