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Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2014 11:59 am
by AntonSlavik020
Oh OK. That makes a hell of alot more sense. I thought it seemd like a rather drastic change in tone.

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2014 12:04 pm
by Mader Levap
BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:TL;DR: Hisao rooting Misha is canon, Kenji KO-ing Misha is a joke post.
Huh. I thought "Kenji going to deep end" part was just after hanky-panky.

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2014 1:10 pm
by Hoitash
BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:TL;DR: Hisao rooting Misha is canon, Kenji KO-ing Misha is a joke post.
...This has got to be one of the best trolls in the history of literature.

I salute you, Mr. ProfAllister.

/Salute.

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2014 1:42 pm
by Oscar Wildecat
BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:TL;DR: Hisao rooting Misha is canon, Kenji KO-ing Misha is a joke post.
The scary part is, joke post or not, it is in character for Kenji.

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2014 4:45 pm
by OutofBlues
Totally worth the wait. :D Can't wait to see where you're going with Shizune's "date."

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2014 6:48 pm
by Mirage_GSM
BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:TL;DR: Hisao rooting Misha is canon, Kenji KO-ing Misha is a joke post.
I tried to convince him to actually use that part later in the story, but I failed :cry:
It would have been awesome to see the fallout of this...

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2014 7:55 pm
by pip25
BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:TL;DR: Hisao rooting Misha is canon, Kenji KO-ing Misha is a joke post.
I wonder how many people can guess where this "adult content disabled" Kenji scene originates from... :)

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 8/7) (18+)

Posted: Sat Jan 18, 2014 10:06 pm
by timetravelzero
Excellent as always, ProfAllister! Really loved the bit with Kenji. I only noticed one minor slip in the story here:
ProfAllister wrote:only to discover yet another level of depth opening up to me - and odd feeling, but certainly not unpleasant.
I believe you meant "an odd feeling". Other than that, excellently put together and (as always) exceeded my expectations by leaps and bounds. Absolutely worth the wait!

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2014 12:12 am
by Dumanios
I'll repeat it being worth the wait, and Kenji throughout was just hilarious.

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2014 5:44 am
by SpcPotshot
That was well worth the wait...and the Kenji post was the icing on the cake XD

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2014 9:12 am
by Atario
BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:I feel I should clarify, since it is quite easily missed
Uhhhhhhhhhhh. I feel that should have been explained thoroughly in the posts themselves. "Quite easily missed"?? There's absolutely nothing indicating it! I was sitting here going "What. The. Fuck.". Kenji breaks in on them sleeping naked together and chloroforms her? Then Hisao (relatively calmly!) has a discussion about it in the nude? Then gets punched and chloroformed himself? "Off the rails" doesn't even begin to capture the feeling…

Ok. Beyond that immersion-breaking blunder…
  • Emi comes off like a total psycho.
  • Narwhal??
  • Lilly comes off like a total bitch.
  • "Hnnnngg". You cheeky bastard.
  • "Elephant in the room". Well well! Not much for modesty, are you, Hisao!
  • Typo: "…pushing down when sheer does the same."

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2014 10:33 am
by AntonSlavik020
Atario wrote:
  • Emi comes off like a total psycho.
Really? Everything else I agree with, but I think everything she said was well founded. If anything, Hisao was the one in the wrong.

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2014 11:12 am
by Atario
AntonSlavik020 wrote:
Atario wrote:
  • Emi comes off like a total psycho.
Really? Everything else I agree with, but I think everything she said was well founded. If anything, Hisao was the one in the wrong.
I'm thinking specifically of the part where they're talking at the bus stop, and she goes into a rant that ends with her screeching, falling to her knees, repeatedly punching the ground, and sobbing. I mean, picture anyone you know actually doing this.

Then she gets up and goes about her day like nothing happened.

♪ Psycho! ♬

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2014 11:33 am
by ProfAllister
Apologies for the confusion. I didn't really think things through when putting them together (The breadcrumbs work!), and, to compound matters, the "Disable Adult Content" sequence fits on a bit TOO seamlessly tacked onto the end of the actual scene. I take full responsibility and will retreat in shame for three months before I begin work on the next chapter. (That's a joke.)
Atario wrote:
  • Emi comes off like a total psycho.
  • Narwhal??
  • Lilly comes off like a total bitch.
  • "Hnnnngg". You cheeky bastard.
  • "Elephant in the room". Well well! Not much for modesty, are you, Hisao!
  • Typo: "…pushing down when sheer does the same."
As always, thanks for the warm response and feedback. Here's hoping the next chapter gets up a tiny bit faster.

Re: For Want of a Nail - Misha Route (New Chapter 1/18)

Posted: Sun Jan 19, 2014 11:35 am
by AnathRaema
BlackWaltzTheThird wrote:Hisao rooting Misha is canon
Why am I not surprised you're an Aussie just from you using the term rooting.