Pedagogy

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Damn, I've been trolled. Nicely done, Aura! :-D
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Nicely done... :shock:
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I was thoroughly enjoying this story from Mutou's PoV. The way you occasionally drifted off on a tangent absolutely stank of Mutou and I loved it. He definitely seems to have some form of ADD.

The ending though. I don't know why, but it was the nipple clamps that got me.
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Okay normally I'm not a huge fan of necro, but this was worth the reshuffling... It's all so very normal until the last 300 words or so... I didn't know Aura had ever taken such a hard left turn in a narrative - bravo!
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Helbereth wrote:Okay normally I'm not a huge fan of necro, but this was worth the reshuffling... It's all so very normal until the last 300 words or so...
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LOL xDD
I just about died in those last few lines; as far from anything I'd have expected as it gets :lol:
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Aura wrote:Pedagogy
Nice.
Throw Nomiya into the mix and that is when science meets art.
I wonder if Mutou can find the "Next Big Thing" that he's so interested.
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No. Just no.
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What has science done?

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..whaaaat ttheeeeEEE FUUUCCKKK ??

It seemed serious. It seemed real.
Like a good short side story.

And then, like a slap in the face reality comes crashing down in the form of the last few sentences.

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It was still funny, in its own creepy way.
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I mean... okay. Yeah, definitely.
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I lean back on my chair – it squeaks in protest – and ponder the essence of being a teacher.
was about to comment that the bit in the middle seemed to deliberately detract from the mood. then i read till the end and thought: never mind.

if a dev writes it it automatically becomes canon right? :)
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Thank goodness it doesn't. What appears in the VN is canon. Troll-stories by the devs can be safely dismissed.
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Guest Poster wrote:Thank goodness it doesn't. What appears in the VN is canon. Troll-stories by the devs can be safely dismissed.
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