I really, really enjoyed reading that little bit. Your story is enjoyable overall, Thanatos, but I find it really shines in the moments where you make Hisao immensely relatable (at least to me). Hisao's drunken confession was one of those moments, and this car scene was another. In fact, it really reminds me of conversations I had with the girl I'm dating now before we got together. I like to imagine that Hisao and Akira were playing it cool on the outside, but internally quite giddy about that little exchangeThanatos02 wrote:The car conversation was actually supposed to be something subtle, but it does serve its purpose either way.
Anyways I really enjoyed it and will be looking forward to the next chapter