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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/08]

Post by Doomish » Wed Oct 17, 2012 1:00 am

Euuuuuugh it is with a heavy heart that I say I am removing choices from the route. I was going to keep them but it's just too much effort compared to how expansive it'd end up being. As is, I think I'm going to oust choices altogether and just tell it like a story. Maybe someday when all is said and done I'll go back and write some choice-y things but for now we get to just sit back and watch things unfold.

(Also, I corrected that little quip about misha seeing hisao in class, don't tell anyone~)

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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/08]

Post by Scissorlips » Thu Oct 18, 2012 1:58 am

That's a shame to hear, but it all really boils down to what you think works best for your story. So I take it this means you only plan on having one ending path?
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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/08]

Post by badmanslayer04 » Thu Oct 18, 2012 12:44 pm

I would just like to say Doomish out of all the great profile pictures I have seen yours is by far my favourite
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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/08]

Post by Blaze117 » Mon Oct 22, 2012 2:25 am

I've read the rewrite and current versions and I am very excited for reading more of this. :)
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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/08]

Post by CaptainFalcon » Mon Oct 22, 2012 6:03 am

Absolutely loving the rewrite Doomish, so happy that everything is back on track with the Misha route. Kudos to you! :D

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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/08]

Post by Ciclo » Sat Oct 27, 2012 9:34 pm

Really liking the re-write, can't wait for it to be finished! :D
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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/08]

Post by Po1ntBlank » Mon Oct 29, 2012 4:17 pm

Please keep this going!
Hanako: 9.5/10
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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

Post by Doomish » Tue Oct 30, 2012 12:54 pm

Forget it.
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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

Post by Po1ntBlank » Tue Oct 30, 2012 6:29 pm

Doomish wrote:I don't think I'll ver fully understand Kenji,
I've never really attempted to proofread, but why not. Noticed a little typo there ;)
Doomish wrote:She gives me a wink. "Shicchan says I'd be more aero-dy-namic if my hair were in a ponytail, so now it is~!" She pronounces 'aerodynamic' like the word has never left her lips before. I wonder if she knows what it means.
This is what I LOVE about your writing. The little nitty-gritty things that you do that really make you feel like this text is directly pulled from the game. It's as if you read and reread every single line about Misha in the game there is, and incorporated it into your story. I applaud you!

I'm not that far through the chapter yet, so I'll edit this if I find anything interesting
Doomish wrote:3:01 PM - Doomish: Misha skips along beside me, humming a cheery tune to herself. At least she's staying optimistic about the weather. She doesn't look like she even cares that she gets the occasional odd glance, but I guess with the pink hair she's used to it by now.
Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?
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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

Post by Helbereth » Tue Oct 30, 2012 6:57 pm

Po1ntBlank wrote:Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?
That's nothing! Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!
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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

Post by Po1ntBlank » Tue Oct 30, 2012 7:24 pm

Helbereth wrote:
Po1ntBlank wrote:Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?
That's nothing! Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!
(Doomish, quick, use the neuralizer!)
I'm actually a bit curious now what it is.
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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

Post by YOTC » Tue Oct 30, 2012 8:50 pm

Po1ntBlank wrote:
Helbereth wrote:
Po1ntBlank wrote:Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?
That's nothing! Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!
(Doomish, quick, use the neuralizer!)
I'm actually a bit curious now what it is.
I'd assume IRC.

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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

Post by BlackWaltzTheThird » Tue Oct 30, 2012 8:59 pm

Doomish wrote:Maybe Kenji was right
OH SHI-
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Po1ntBlank wrote:
Doomish wrote:3:01 PM - Doomish: Misha skips along beside me, humming a cheery tune to herself. At least she's staying optimistic about the weather. She doesn't look like she even cares that she gets the occasional odd glance, but I guess with the pink hair she's used to it by now.
Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?
I was wondering that as well.
Helbereth wrote:That's nothing! Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!
Wait... is that a Wizard of Oz reference? Are you trying to tell me that Doomish is not a wizard after all? He can't actually send me home to Kansas? My entire life has been a lie. ;_;
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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

Post by YourFavAnon » Tue Oct 30, 2012 9:41 pm

Po1ntBlank wrote:
Helbereth wrote:
Po1ntBlank wrote:Hahah what's the "3:01 PM - Doomish:" for?
That's nothing! Pay no attention to the man behind the curtain!
(Doomish, quick, use the neuralizer!)
I'm actually a bit curious now what it is.
He wrote the story live in the steam group some of us chill in, as he almost always does.
I write things occasionally.

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Re: Doomish's Misha Route: The Rewrite! [Updated 10/30]

Post by Hoitash » Tue Oct 30, 2012 9:43 pm

YourFavAnon wrote: He wrote the story live in the steam group some of us chill in, as he almost always does.
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Nice work as usual, by the way. Your Misha is adorable :)
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