Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

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Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

Post by TheHouseholdWarrior » Tue Sep 25, 2012 12:19 pm

So I was doing nothing and being idle for hours on end, and this idea came to mind.

It's a Friendship is Magic/Katawa Shoujo crossover, and it takes place right during the summer holiday right after Emi's good ending, but is mostly centered around Rin (although the story isn't told from her perspective).

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/53148/O ... and-Hooves

Comments and criticism is appreciated, either here or on fimfiction.

Thanks!

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Re: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

Post by kulkukan » Tue Sep 25, 2012 1:45 pm

I... hate. simple. pure. and justified hate.

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Post by George Da Moose » Tue Sep 25, 2012 9:59 pm

This is promising.
Very promising.
I'll expect the next chapter to have Hisao riding Twilight Sparkle while Emi has her way with Rainbow Dash and Applejack.
Don't disappoint me.

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Re: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

Post by Yellow 13 » Wed Sep 26, 2012 6:31 am

>mfw poines
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When the war, has been won
And our march home begins
What awaits has not yet been revealed
What was won? what was lost?
Will our deeds be remembered?
Are they written on stone or in sand?

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Re: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

Post by TheHouseholdWarrior » Fri Sep 28, 2012 1:55 am

kulkukan wrote:I... hate. simple. pure. and justified hate.
Justified...?
If it's about the fact that there are ponies in them, then don't reply. I don't want to start a fight.
If its about my writing style, characterization, grammar, or anything actually related to telling the story itself, then please tell me frankly what you feel about them. Because I need to improve myself and my writing in as many ways as possible.
Thanks.

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Re: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

Post by TheHouseholdWarrior » Fri Sep 28, 2012 1:58 am

George Da Moose wrote:This is promising.
Very promising.
I'll expect the next chapter to have Hisao riding Twilight Sparkle while Emi has her way with Rainbow Dash and Applejack.
Don't disappoint me.
Just give it a minute...

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Re: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

Post by Bi-Polar Hernandez » Fri Sep 28, 2012 3:34 pm

>ponies

WE DID IT.

WE FUCKING DID IT.

WE HIT BRONY TIER. I TOLD YOU MOTHERFUCKERS THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN BUT NO ONE LISTENED.

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Re: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

Post by Sgt_Frog » Sat Sep 29, 2012 7:58 pm

Aw, I was expecting the girls to be ponified. Equestria has mental disorders by the dozens ("Party of One", "Lesson Zero", that institutionalized pony in "Read It And Weep") but very few physically handicapped ponies.

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Re: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

Post by Jack of H3arts » Sat Sep 29, 2012 8:27 pm

Bi-Polar Hernandez wrote:>ponies

WE DID IT.

WE FUCKING DID IT.

WE HIT BRONY TIER. I TOLD YOU MOTHERFUCKERS THAT THIS WOULD HAPPEN BUT NO ONE LISTENED.
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Okay, okay, I don't mean to sound like a dick, but you do seem inordinately upset.
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Rin>Akira>Lily>Shizune>Hanako>Emi

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Re: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

Post by Guest90206 » Sun Sep 30, 2012 4:52 pm

I...


I... uh...


I don't...


...fuck it, I'll read it.

EDIT: DAMMIT I CAN'T STOP READING IT WHAT THE FUCK DID YOU DO TO ME
Hanabro to the end.

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Post by Ruthalas » Tue Jun 11, 2013 6:12 pm

I wait with baited breath for the next chapter HouseholdWarrior!

Don't forget us! :)

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Re: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

Post by griffon8 » Wed Jun 12, 2013 12:52 am

"Oh great," I thought. "Another new post on a thread that hasn't updated in over eight months.

"Why won't they learn… wait, the story is hosted elsewhere? And the last update was at the end of March?"

But I won't be reading it anyway. There are limits to what I can take in a crossover, and this goes waaaaaaay beyond that point.
I found out about Katawa Shoujo through the forums of Misfile. There, I am the editor of Misfiled Dreams.

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Re: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

Post by forgetmenot » Wed Jun 12, 2013 8:01 pm

griffon8 wrote:But I won't be reading it anyway. There are limits to what I can take in a crossover, and this goes waaaaaaay beyond that point.
Agreed. My disbelief is far to heavy to be suspended. At this rate, it'd collapse the brooklyn bridge if hung from the bottom.

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Re: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

Post by KeiichiO » Wed Jun 12, 2013 9:12 pm

Pffft.

Close-minded fools.

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Re: Of Arms, Legs, and Hooves

Post by Suox » Wed Jun 12, 2013 11:16 pm

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