Wait...reverse-rape? Link please! I must check it out...for science, of course.themocaw wrote:Yeah, well, the original writing prompt this story was derived from was Misha raping Mutou, so I did the porn scene first then backfilled.Oddball wrote:Oddly enough, I just read the older version day before yesterday and really felt that stuff destroyed the story you had going.
MishMutou
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BobBobberson
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Re: MishMutou
That guy who writes too many crossovers.
Running Interference, a tale of Hisao and another purple-eyed girl.
My One-Shot Depository full of random stories
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Running Interference, a tale of Hisao and another purple-eyed girl.
My One-Shot Depository full of random stories
FF.net profile
Re: MishMutou
Good change.themocaw wrote:Yeah, well, the original writing prompt this story was derived from was Misha raping Mutou, so I did the porn scene first then backfilled.Oddball wrote:Oddly enough, I just read the older version day before yesterday and really felt that stuff destroyed the story you had going.
Not Dead Yet
Re: MishMutou
PMs.BobBobberson wrote:Wait...reverse-rape? Link please! I must check it out...for science, of course.themocaw wrote:Yeah, well, the original writing prompt this story was derived from was Misha raping Mutou, so I did the porn scene first then backfilled.Oddball wrote:Oddly enough, I just read the older version day before yesterday and really felt that stuff destroyed the story you had going.
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Scissorlips
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Re: MishMutou
Not necessarily "raping", it was actually "won't take no for an answer". But yeah.themocaw wrote:Yeah, well, the original writing prompt this story was derived from was Misha raping Mutou, so I did the porn scene first then backfilled.
Glad to see this story again. I agree that removing the blowjob improved the piece as a whole, and I don't remember the epilogue being there last time, that was a punch to the gut. But in a good way.
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I'm a writer for a visual novel project called Familiarity, where I go by the name Lunch.
I'm a writer for a visual novel project called Familiarity, where I go by the name Lunch.
Re: MishMutou
Ugh, now I have to support this dumb pairing. Thanks for writing so good.
"Spunky at his Spunkyest/Spunkiest"
"Tissues to the extreme!"
"Tissues to the extreme!"
Re: MishMutou
I've struck gold. Great work.
Girls: Hanako/Misha > Lilly > Emi > Shizune/Rin
Routes: I realized that every route has its own charms, but felt that Shizune's was lacklustre. It has Misha though!
"No masters or kings, when the ritual begins"
Routes: I realized that every route has its own charms, but felt that Shizune's was lacklustre. It has Misha though!
"No masters or kings, when the ritual begins"