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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by Guest Poster » Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:23 pm

Story has been moved to another thread. See opening post.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by Guest Poster » Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:23 pm

Story has been moved to another thread. See opening post.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by Guest Poster » Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:24 pm

Story has been moved to another thread. See opening post.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by Guest Poster » Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:24 pm

Story has been moved to another thread. See opening post.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by Brogurt » Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:31 pm

why are some things in parenthesis?

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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by Guest Poster » Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:34 pm

Posted all chapters.

Edit: Stuff in quotes is said. Stuff in parenthesis is thought.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by Brogurt » Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:38 pm

Then what are the things that have neither parenthesis nor quotes? If those are thoughts as well, then from where cometh the idea to have some things in parenthesis and most things out of parenthesis.

Either way this is a shit ton of writing and I'll get back to it later. Can't say that the length is a huge turn-on or anything.

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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by Guest Poster » Thu Jul 12, 2012 7:46 pm

Stuff without parenthesis or quotes is simply narration. And yeah, it's pretty large. Or rather...I dislike episodic releases in both stories and games. So instead of posting one chapter, answering comments for a week, writing another one, retconning the half of the first one, writing two more, getting writers block and not finishing another one for two months etc, etc, I simply refrained from posting the whole thing until all chapters were completed. It's a personal preference.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by LOL WUT » Fri Jul 13, 2012 5:23 am

Wait so a Hanako bad ending and a Lilly Good ending within a Hanako good ending?

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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by Guest Poster » Fri Jul 13, 2012 5:46 am

That's not a bad way to put it.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by EmiBro » Fri Jul 13, 2012 6:57 am

...Jesus Christ, this is one of the best KS fanfictions I've ever read. I honestly don't see what other Hanako epilogues could top this one. This is good enough to be it's own route.

I was skeptical when you decided to post it all at once with no feedback, and it did take a LONG time to read, but it was worth it. I really hope you write more because you're an amazing writer.

I particularly liked the last chapter. SO MANY FEELS.

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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by YourFavAnon » Fri Jul 13, 2012 12:42 pm

Just got finished reading. Incredibly great read, man. I kind of almost wish you hadn't ended it, but it ended it quite a reasonable way, so I shouldn't complain.

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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by ThistlewickVII » Fri Jul 13, 2012 12:56 pm

Totally worth an hour in my life. Amazing.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by Hoitash » Fri Jul 13, 2012 10:37 pm

...That was...I have no words...

Excellent read, thank you for posting it.
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Re: Sisterhood (Hanako Epilogue) (Completed)

Post by nemz » Sat Jul 14, 2012 1:29 am

I agree that the formatting is troublesome, but the story itself is quite good. I'm not really a big fan of Hanako or Lilly, but it was a breath of fresh air to see them dealing so directly with their problems rather than immediately becoming mary sues as so often happens in fics featuring them. Your characterization of Hisao also managed the careful balance of clueless and well-intentioned that so often gets skewed to one side only.
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