Katawa Aniki (KS Rewrite) (18+ Occasionally) [Updated 10/30]

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Post by YourFavAnon » Tue Apr 02, 2013 6:37 am

So is it fair to assume that Junichi's last name is actually Bay? Because I'm pretty sure his father is Michael Bay.
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Post by ZtotheT » Tue Apr 02, 2013 5:48 pm

ZtotheT wrote:As said above, love the story great job. Once again keep it going guys!

Oh and in response to Kane's sig spoiler:

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Popo wrote:
That pic ain't workin'. Can't see it. Seems like cdn.memegenerator.net is down.
Well it said:

"You think Lilly is the worst girl, I get that, but you're wrong and I hate you."

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Post by Popo » Fri Apr 05, 2013 11:58 pm

Act 3, Part 12 has entered the building.

It's the legit ending of Act 3 this time, we swear. We hope you got a kick out of our prank, but this release is decidedly a return to form.
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Post by Dippeggs » Sat Apr 06, 2013 4:41 am

Popo wrote:Act 3, Part 12 has entered the building.

It's the legit ending of Act 3 this time, we swear. We hope you got a kick out of our prank, but this release is decidedly a return to form.
I bet Junichi's drawing looked like this

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But in all seriousness good chapter. Short but sweet.

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Post by DietKane » Thu Apr 11, 2013 11:31 pm

I co-write a KS rewrite with my friend Demifiend/Popo. It's called Katawa Aniki
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Post by Dippeggs » Fri Apr 12, 2013 6:25 am

DietKane wrote:We don't like to keep you guys waiting for too long.

Here's the first chapter of Act 4. Hope you enjoy it (and I hope you like Junichi/Hanako chapters)!
Oh god, the very first page.

You made my day.

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Post by Popo » Tue Apr 23, 2013 2:52 am

Dippeggs wrote:Oh god, the very first page.

You made my day.
We aim to please.

And on that note, Act 4, Part 02 is ready for reading.

This is our longest release yet, for those who're counting. We chronicle a day as near and dear to my heart as any non-fictional one I've experienced.
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Post by naxxar » Tue Apr 23, 2013 12:29 pm

That was brilliant. I smiled the whole way through that chapter
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Post by Jylr » Tue Apr 23, 2013 9:57 pm

Yeah! Birthday update, kinda one day late on my birthday post, but great!
I feel like a noob for asking, but can you see other comments on discussion, if so , how?
This is nice... really nice.
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Post by DietKane » Tue Apr 23, 2013 11:12 pm

Jylr wrote:Yeah! Birthday update, kinda one day late on my birthday post, but great!
I feel like a noob for asking, but can you see other comments on discussion, if so , how?
Do you mean comments placed on the chapters through Google Docs? Those usually show up on the document where they were placed for us, but we haven't really had anyone leave comments since the first 2 chapters.
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Post by Popo » Tue Apr 23, 2013 11:33 pm

Jylr wrote:Yeah! Birthday update, kinda one day late on my birthday post, but great!
I feel like a noob for asking, but can you see other comments on discussion, if so , how?
We wish you a happy birthday and a great year of life ahead. We can see comments posted on the documents themselves, and you can even highlight specific text as being in regards to your comment.
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Post by Jylr » Wed Apr 24, 2013 6:39 pm

We wish you a happy birthday and a great year of life ahead. We can see comments posted on the documents themselves, and you can even highlight specific text as being in regards to your comment.

Thanks both for the reply and birthday acknowledgment. I found it after using both your comments and some common sense!
...we haven't really had anyone leave comments since the first 2 chapters.
Guess whose gonna start commenting?
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Post by Popo » Wed Apr 24, 2013 7:03 pm

Haha, cool. We value feedback.
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Post by fluffy_pink » Fri Apr 26, 2013 1:14 am

Currently working through act 2 of your story, and I'm loving it. I particularly like your Rin. I hope she gets to play a bigger part later. I don't have any criticism of note just yet, just want to say thanks and keep up the good work! I'll report back if I have any comments once I'm finished.

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Post by Popo » Mon Apr 29, 2013 12:13 am

fluffy_pink wrote:Currently working through act 2 of your story, and I'm loving it. I particularly like your Rin. I hope she gets to play a bigger part later. I don't have any criticism of note just yet, just want to say thanks and keep up the good work! I'll report back if I have any comments once I'm finished.
Thank you for your sentiments, and thanks for reading. As for Rin, she's kind of a side-character among the main cast, if you will, which is a step up from true side-characters like Mutou, Kenji, Yuuko, etc. Characters like Lilly and Misha get a lot of limelight for being very closely tied to the lead cast of KA, and another character has a reason for drawing closer, while Rin and Emi show up a little more sporadically and do things on their own schedules, but we tried to give all the "Shoujos" some interesting and even some intense moments, and have 'em show up if we feel like they've been absent too long. They get the spotlight shone on them every so often, as well. Since Rin often wanders around and finds herself in unlikely places, and Emi sometimes sees people walking through the school grounds from the track, there's a lot of opportunities for them to show up, even if the plot usually centers around the other characters.
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