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Leaty wrote:Man, I was about to post about how excited I was to have finished a few chapters ahead of schedule, but I see now that Helbereth is back. Image Well, straight to the recycling bin with these one hundred and seventy pages, then. Image
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I tried looking around but can find it

Is there any more art of the main girl besides the cover art?
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AnImpatientUser wrote:I tried looking around but can find it

Is there any more art of the main girl besides the cover art?
To my knowledge thus far, I'm the only one who has done any art of the characters. The cover image is the only one I have access to at the moment; the one other image is on a hard drive that I can't access presently.

Edit: Ah, there's also my signature, though it's only a narrow view.
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Helbereth wrote:
AnImpatientUser wrote:I tried looking around but can find it

Is there any more art of the main girl besides the cover art?
To my knowledge thus far, I'm the only one who has done any art of the characters. The cover image is the only one I have access to at the moment; the one other image is on a hard drive that I can't access presently.

Edit: Ah, there's also my signature, though it's only a narrow view.
Thanks, your cover picture is quite different from what is in KS (i need to see the character that way, its one of my things)
Ill probably end up making my friend do the reading and bribe him to draw her for me with food
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AnImpatientUser wrote:Thanks, your cover picture is quite different from what is in KS (i need to see the character that way, its one of my things)
Yeah, that's bound to happen when the guy drawing has a completely different, and largely non-anime style.
Ill probably end up making my friend do the reading and bribe him to draw her for me with food
Well, I'd like to see how that goes, if it goes.

Also, sorry ch0, still working on the chapter.

Edit: Oh look what I found... I forgot I put it there.
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That's intimidating. Is she 3 meters tall?
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And they say that Lilly is an Amazon.
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neio wrote:That's intimidating. Is she 3 meters tall?
No, she's closer to 1.63 meters (around 5'4"). I'll admit I'm not the best artist in the world.
bhtooefr wrote:And they say that Lilly is an Amazon.
Aiko probably isn't much taller than Shizune, actually - about the same, really.
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can.not.unsee

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anyone have any pictures of girls that look similar to aiko? Any (game,IRL,movie). I go insane on the inside when i read and dont know how she looks like (cover doesnot count, pls)


Also im at chapter 12, so far story is great overall
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Honestly, where Aiko is concerned, I left her description somewhat ambiguous intentionally. Because the story reads through her eyes, it helps with immersion if the reader can fill in some of the details on their own. All I've really specified is that she's full-figured and chesty, but toned from her frequent swimming, and her hair is long, mid-range brown, and wavy - a hereditary trait - with a strip of it that's bleached white running from her left temple that she usually brushes over her left ear - the one that's deafened. She has light, olive-toned skin, is heterochromatic with one green eye and one brown eye, has a narrow chin and jawline with pronounced cheekbones, and she wears half-moon black-framed glasses to correct her rather abysmal nearsightedness. Although she has a penchant for painting her toenails and wearing yukata for special occasions, she still dresses like a tomboy, so, outside of her skirt-blouse-and-dark-stockings uniform for school, she rarely wears anything but jeans and t-shirts.

Anything more than that, I've left up to the reader.
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Thank you

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>she's full-figured and chesty, but toned from her frequent swimming,
>full figured
>but toned

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AnImpatientUser wrote:Thank you

Also

>she's full-figured and chesty, but toned from her frequent swimming,
>full figured
>but toned

U wot m8
Toned in the sense that Scarlet Johansson or Megan Fox are toned. Strong and fit, but still decidedly feminine in shape. One of the major problems with describing her as such in the confines of the narrative is that she doesn't see herself that way. Hisao probably does, and his internal monologue would probably be much more descriptive, but, on the inside, Aiko is still the chubby girl she was in middle-school, so, on the odd occasion where she describes herself, her figure is downplayed.

It's the self-image versus reality paradox.
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Thanks for clearing it up.
One last question and ill piss off
Yoko is that british red head girl righ? (sorry i have sklerosis, i read chapters 1-6 again but cant remember)
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AnImpatientUser wrote:Thanks for clearing it up.
One last question and ill piss off
Yoko is that british red head girl righ? (sorry i have sklerosis, i read chapters 1-6 again but cant remember)
Canadian, but yeah, Yoko is the red head :)
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