Can you hide your fears? - Saki arc[Updated 6/8]

[Novangel]

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[themocaw]

More Saki love is always good. I approve.

[Novangel]

More Saki love is always good. I approve.

Reading your interpretation of Saki for comparison, I wish I thought of a maid cafe.

[Leaty]

Update: Wow there's already a WIP Saki arc, I'm just gonna kill myself now. (Not really though)

Yeah, I feel your pain. I wanted to do a Suzu branch for the longest time, but since there's already a perfectly serviceable one, I decided there wouldn't be any point, at least while that's still going on (if it never finished, that'd be a different story.) That's one of the main reasons I started an Iwanako fic instead.

Anyway, I think you misspelled the name of your first chapter; it's "Nosferatu," not "Nosterafu."

Sorry for not providing any feedback on what you've written thus far, but it's hard for me to critique something shorter than 2,000 words. I'm curious to see how you'll flesh out the story. The image you made at the top is nice, though.

[Novangel]

Oops fixed, I always pronounced it like that.
And yeah, Act I might be a little on the familiar side, sorry about that but gotta do the introductions and whatnot.
Scene 2 should be posted sometime tomorrow, couldn't write much today


Update 6/16: Sorry, got sidetracked due to exams revisions, scene 2 will definitely be up tomorrow

Update 6/17:I've decided to put this on hold, I think Themocaw's story does Saki justice from what I've read so far, and uni is busier than ever. I apologise to everyone

[Ranger]

Very nice, I'll read it later.

[Bacon Elemental]

Very nice, I'll read it later.

Um, the last update was on June, so I think it's safe to assume that there won't be any "later" scenes.