A Haiku for each girl!

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Re: A Haiku for each girl!

Post by # 2 » Thu Jun 07, 2012 6:02 pm

Legs, carbon fiber,
Heart of steel, will of iron,
I'll not know defeat.
My Deviations. Please try not to laugh.

Lemons, not just for tangy drinks and incendiaries anymore!

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Re: A Haiku for each girl!

Post by BlackWaltzTheThird » Thu Jun 07, 2012 6:18 pm

crushinator wrote:A heart is broken,
a bond of two people made,
can love heal all wounds?
Indeed, sir, it can.
Love does heal all wounds, except
Hanako's burn scars.

*shock* *awe* *gasp* *booooooo*

Gotta find some gloves.
Hey, maybe in the track shed?
Lemon-y goodness!

They say love is blind.
If that's the case, then I have
Already found it.

The old me is gone;
Never to return. He is
But a broken shell.

Hurt; scarred; broken;
I will rise from the ashes:
Reborn, with new hope.

My soul is canvas.
Everything and nothing,
Art is how I feel.
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Re: A Haiku for each girl!

Post by # 2 » Thu Jun 07, 2012 6:40 pm

Your form is precise,
But lacking in tenderness.
Finesse is your friend.

Burlesque? Say not so!
I request soft sighs, loves kiss.
Knights in white satin.

Brute force wins nothing,
The solution is simple.
Thesaurus! To arms!

Blind love, you pierce me,
Light tresses, azure gaze, lo!
No more do I search.

So! Here's to rebirth.
The old self cast off, now look!
A new man stands forth.

Bright burning phoenix,
Take me now into your care.
Sear away my pains.

Ok, so I jest,
Take not my jollies to heart,
Shakespeare was my guide.
My Deviations. Please try not to laugh.

Lemons, not just for tangy drinks and incendiaries anymore!

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Kielox
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Re: A Haiku for each girl!

Post by Kielox » Tue Jun 26, 2012 7:35 am

I don't know how I missed the last two entries of this, they are great!
King of a hundred horsemen.

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Helbereth
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Re: A Haiku for each girl!

Post by Helbereth » Tue Jun 26, 2012 10:17 am

Emi:
A gunshot rings clear
The dust flying in her wake
No legs, no cares, free

Shizune:
Steely gaze upon me
Hands flow in artful relay
Victory she claims

Hanako:
Eyes meet nervously
Truly smiling thoughtfully
She reads peacefully

Lilly:
Clatter of finery
Listen contemplatively
Searching for balance

Rin:
Vision and focus
Reality imagined
The canvas of life

Crap, I messed one of them up... herp derp, fixing... fix'd

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Kielox
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Re: A Haiku for each girl!

Post by Kielox » Tue Jun 26, 2012 12:20 pm

@Hellbereth
So far writing a good Rin haiku has always eluded me for some reason. Yours is quite perfect, thank you! :)
King of a hundred horsemen.

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