Oddball wrote:Glad you liked it.
Just being curious, which ending was your favorite?
I'm Sorry! I'm Sorry! I was offline, catching up on my sleep, I'm very Sorry!
Errm, I think the Misha-route was my favourite,
I'm not sure why, but if I'm not reading too much into it; it's because I think Misha and Hisao are worlds apart, but suddenly find something in common in their "loneliness" and "lack of a girlfriend". (quite under rather unusual of circumstances to boot), that seems somewhat.. "sweet" to me.
You handled it very well, in terms of getting the "pairing" to work.
I wasn't expecting the ending with the "anime of a certain type"-line, but that was just the sugary icing on top of it all. The kind that makes the whole cake even better. To me at least.
Still, the Hanako-route and Miki-route are also close favourites, simply because I like those girls.
The "Lilly vs Shizune"-bickering ending of the "Group-route" was also reason enough to like it a lot...
And the "Kenji / Bad Ending"-route had the most entertaining ending of them all!
And I mean, come on; Suzu in underwear. In the boys dorm. And she suddenly falls asleep. Some naughty thoughts must cross at least Hisao's mind there, he's Gotta think about putting her on his bed, so she's at least comfortable while she sleeps. And that will test just how far Hisao's self-restraint goes... oh my.
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I may hold the record here for most naked characters in a story without having any sex scenes.
What's with that?
It sounds simple enough, just have a historic field trip, with Othello leading because he's cheap and the only real historian around. Then it ironically rains in Hokkaido (which usually doesn't get too much rain, even in the rainy season).
They all get soaked, and have to immediately change to avoid a catching a serious cold, the bus breaks down in front of a hot spring. And everyone shares towels.
The teachers and parents came along, even Jigoro, because there has to be a scene where Mutou, Jigoro, Nomiya, and basically all the male adults get in a room and start declaring "you the man!" "No! YOU the man!"
Hisao and Hideaki end up accidentally with Lilly's group, who never saw them there. Kenji goes around "spying". Misha enjoys the time of her life. And Hanako enjoys the actual hot springs all by herself because it was cooled from the rain, but not so cold it stops her.
And Yuuko and Meiko and Saionji start talking candidly about their naked bodies, much to the pleasure of Hisao.
(It's all still technically a "Shower Scene", since Hot Springs are almost a "Shower", right?)
Again; Good Job Oddball.
You must be proud that everyone's gunning after your sexy record now.
Verily; You The MAN!