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Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:35 pm
by Oddball
I purposley decided to leave who they belonged to up to the readers imagination.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:49 pm
by txalolrn9
maybe they're Hanako's after all, but she didn't want Hisao to know

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Tue Jul 17, 2012 2:53 pm
by Enemy |
My habit of marking the whole Fan-fiction subforum as read made me forget about this.
Still as funny as always. I had to stop for a sec to grasp for air at the "It looks nice" part.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 12:44 am
by Bagheera
txalolrn9 wrote:maybe they're Hanako's after all, but she didn't want Hisao to know
That would have been my guess. I think Emi's probably a more likely candidate, though.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 6:06 am
by Helbereth
It's somehow appropriate that a story like this would result in a hypothetical discussion about the ownership of sexy panties among fictional characters. I applaud the author for creating an environment where such a thing could happen naturally, and I encourage Oddball to continue writing such fantasies because this forum needs more lightness.

..and panties.

Mostly panties.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 7:07 am
by Silentcook
Oddball wrote:I tried to go a different direction. I was wondering if I had gone a bit too far with things myself.
I do believe that by trimming away ten lines or so, tops, you could get back to the same quality as the rest.

You know, the lines where Hisao's brain seems to behave like Kenji's? The things which, should a friend admit to having done that, would get a disgusted face and a "what the FUCK, man" out of you instead of a "you're nuts", a chuckle, and a shake of the head?

But yeah, opinions.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Wed Jul 18, 2012 12:28 pm
by badmanslayer04
Maybe this could be some form of sequel to classroom games. Just before Hisao asks Misha to dinner he remembers what Miki said and asks her instead Boom :lol:

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 1:38 am
by ShinigamiKenji
It's 2:30 AM here where I live. And yet I laughed so loud my mom just scolded me to be quieter.

Totally worth it.
Oddball wrote:As I walked down the hallway, I debated with myself whether to swing by Misha's and see if she wanted to go get some food or not.

I'm not exactly sure I wanted to, but I did feel I kind of owed her and it's not like anything could go wrong by asking her, could it?
Silentcook already scolded me for my high expectations...

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Thu Jul 19, 2012 12:08 pm
by SongNai145
This was freaking hilarious and I loved every second of reading it. I have to ask, what inspired this whole thing? Did you have to think about it or was it just a random thought? I would like to see a possible sequel or continuation if possible.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 1:19 pm
by Oddball
SongNai145 wrote:This was freaking hilarious and I loved every second of reading it. I have to ask, what inspired this whole thing?
I picture edit that somebody did having all the girls nude sprites in Hisao's room at the same time. That and having seen far too many 80s teen sex comedies like Zapped, Porky's, and Hot Dog the Movie.
Did you have to think about it or was it just a random thought?
Lots of thought. Lots and LOTS of thought.
and going back and re-writing.
and then posting things have lots of errors in them anyway. :(
I would like to see a possible sequel or continuation if possible.
It ain't over yet!

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 8:55 pm
by ShinigamiKenji
Oddball wrote: It ain't over yet!
Oddball wrote:
It ain't over yet!
Oddball wrote:
It ain't over yet!
My sides... HHHNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGG!!!!

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Fri Jul 20, 2012 9:26 pm
by Helbereth
ShinigamiKenji wrote:
Oddball wrote: It ain't over yet!
Oddball wrote:
It ain't over yet!
Oddball wrote:
It ain't over yet!
My sides... HHHNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGG!!!!
Your sides? Your heart is where your kidneys are supposed to be? What's in place of your heart, an extra stomach? Are you a mutant?

My brain does funny things when I go into Rin-mode.

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2012 12:05 am
by ShinigamiKenji
Helbereth wrote:
ShinigamiKenji wrote:
My sides... HHHNNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGG!!!!
Your sides? Your heart is where your kidneys are supposed to be? What's in place of your heart, an extra stomach? Are you a mutant?

My brain does funny things when I go into Rin-mode.
HOLY F***ING S***!!! WHAT DID THE FEMINISTS DO WITH ME??

(Interesting enough, my real middle name is Kenji 8) )

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2012 2:13 am
by LOL WUT
(Interesting enough, my real middle name is Kenji )
middle name is Kenji
Kenji
Oh aren't you cool.

Well my real middle name is Hisao.


No it's not. I don't even have a middle name. * Sad Face *

Re: Shower Scenes

Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2012 5:51 am
by Helbereth
My middle name is Gerard.

It's also my dad's middle name, but he uses it as his first name. His first name is Gill, but he goes by G. Gerard. Our last name is even more impossible to pronounce correctly without a background in French. Most commonly people replace the 'r' with an 'l' and call him Gerald, for some reason I cannot fathom. Like they think the 'r' is a typo.

He goes by Jerry to his friends.

When we got junk phone calls, the operator usually had about as good a chance of pronouncing his name right as a snowball has in hell. The really entertaining part is that when they made their attempt, and we had no desire to continue the conversation, all we had to say is, "Nobody by that name lives here," and hang up.

Then we would proceed to giggle at the poor sot.