Shower Scenes

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Re: Shower Scenes

Post by the61scissors » Tue Apr 29, 2014 11:21 pm

Easily one of my favorite KS fics of all. Grumpy-Hisao is a joy to read, and all the others get their own moments to make me laugh. The best thing I can say about this is that it feels like part of a 13-26 episode harem anime, and I so want to see more (might have to do something about the self-destructive and alienating personalities and tragic backstories, though).

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Re: Shower Scenes

Post by emi » Mon Jan 09, 2017 2:05 pm

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This line caused me to laugh for several minutes, even when i kept reading on.
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Re: Shower Scenes

Post by Zerebos » Wed Jun 14, 2017 6:40 pm

This is absolutely hysterical! Loved it!

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Re: Shower Scenes

Post by Eurobeatjester » Wed Jun 14, 2017 6:42 pm

I only got around to reading this about two weeks ago, and I want to say this is one of the most hilarious and charming fics I've ever read, much less from Katawa Shoujo. The way it played out was absolutely amazing, and it was written in such a way I never had that moment were I had to suspend my disbelief - I could totally see this happening. :lol:

Thanks a lot for the great read.
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Re: Shower Scenes

Post by Toothless » Fri Jun 16, 2017 7:02 pm

I love how Hisao's main concern is what will the nurse say when they find him collapsed with his room full of naked girls. Great stuff, very funny.

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Re: Shower Scenes

Post by Oddball » Mon Jun 19, 2017 9:17 pm

Glad people are still enjoying it.
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Re: Shower Scenes

Post by sloth4 » Thu Apr 12, 2018 9:19 pm

I laughed so damn hard the first time I read this. The sheer awkwardness of the situation, and the constant reminders to stop pointing. Top notch stuff.

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Re: Shower Scenes

Post by OtakuNinja » Sat Dec 29, 2018 9:11 pm

I'm glad these fanfics are still around. Haven't been active on the forums since 2013.

I spent a couple of hours saving screenshots of this fanfic, for those who want to download it. Be aware that the images are not in the correct order, but I named the chapters in the desciption.
https://imgur.com/a/OQwkIWY
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Re: Shower Scenes

Post by Raimen » Thu Jan 10, 2019 2:58 pm

Oddball wrote:
Mon Jun 19, 2017 9:17 pm
Glad people are still enjoying it.
Not just that, but some people are writing their own "Shower Scenes" fanfic.

OK. Maybe it's just me. I'm 5000 words into a divergent sequel to the "Wait until I see Misha in class..." ending, wondering "what if things didn't go quite as the girls had planned". It's my first fanfic (for any story), and I'm a very slow writer. Hopefully I finish it sometime in 2019, but I'm not counting on it.

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Re: Shower Scenes

Post by Oddball » Thu Jan 10, 2019 11:36 pm

Raimen wrote:
Thu Jan 10, 2019 2:58 pm
Oddball wrote:
Mon Jun 19, 2017 9:17 pm
Glad people are still enjoying it.
Not just that, but some people are writing their own "Shower Scenes" fanfic.

OK. Maybe it's just me. I'm 5000 words into a divergent sequel to the "Wait until I see Misha in class..." ending, wondering "what if things didn't go quite as the girls had planned". It's my first fanfic (for any story), and I'm a very slow writer. Hopefully I finish it sometime in 2019, but I'm not counting on it.
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