A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (completed)

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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by Lumi » Fri Aug 03, 2012 1:06 am

theartificial wrote:
Lumi wrote:Another offering, master...

http://i.imgur.com/QeIAn.jpg

I tried to color this one, but I'm no good with any medium besides normal pencils.
Bicep on her left arm. Just like her father... A bodybuilder.
Nah but seriously you're putting out some good drawings. :)
Thanks, bro! And how do I get the Suzu signature?
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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by theartificial » Fri Aug 03, 2012 7:05 am

You want to put to click the 'Img' button while editing your signature and inbetween the two [img][img] you will want to put http://i.imgur.com/7ezAz.png.

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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by Zombiedude101 » Fri Aug 03, 2012 7:56 pm

I've credited you in my sig, nice Userbar BTW.
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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by Roamin12 » Sat Aug 04, 2012 11:38 pm

I've been off the forums for awhile and I come back to this and, holy shit.
Quite a lot of has happened in the 1&1/2 months I've been gone.
All I can say is, that my feels, are all over the damn place (I read about the last eight or so chapter in one sitting.).
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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by random » Mon Aug 06, 2012 6:25 pm

just imagine if the ending is all suzu's dream

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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by Helbereth » Tue Aug 07, 2012 12:00 am

random wrote:just imagine if the ending is all suzu's dream
I don't think Scissorlips is going to pull a Newhart on us like that; talk about cruel and unusual punishment.

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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by Zombiedude101 » Tue Aug 07, 2012 8:54 pm

Helbereth wrote:
random wrote:just imagine if the ending is all suzu's dream
I don't think Scissorlips is going to pull a Newhart on us like that; talk about cruel and unusual punishment.
If there was.....

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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by Helbereth » Wed Aug 08, 2012 8:11 am

Starting to get antsy here.

Hear my plea! Down upon my knee! When shall the next chapter be?

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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by griffon8 » Wed Aug 08, 2012 8:28 am

It will be here Image. Jeeze, what's with all the requesting lately? It's specifically against the rules here.
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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by badmanslayer04 » Wed Aug 08, 2012 9:20 am

Although if someone is going to request something I think that was the best way to do it, John Cleese makes everything better
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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by Helbereth » Wed Aug 08, 2012 1:01 pm

Honestly, it's more bluster than a request. I kinda just wanted to use that picture for something.

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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by Roamin12 » Wed Aug 08, 2012 8:57 pm

Mirage_GSM wrote: And blaming herself for his extremely dumb luck of killing himself falling down on the street is... Well, I wouldn't go so far as to call it ridiculous, but it sure is a bit over the top.
It is a little over the top, but it still conveys the message well. And simply falling on the street is enough to kill a person if they fall the wrong way, a senior at my high school was jumping off some semi-large rock (about 2 1/2-3 feet off the ground.) on the school grounds that was next to the road, tripped when he was climbing on it to jump off for the second or third time, fell, busted his head open on the road, and now he's dead. And there are a lot of similar stories out there just happening on the a sidewalk or pretty much anywhere there is pavement
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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by Scissorlips » Thu Aug 09, 2012 1:37 am

Lumi wrote:Another offering, master...

http://i.imgur.com/QeIAn.jpg

I tried to color this one, but I'm no good with any medium besides normal pencils.
Looking good, thank you! If you don't mind, I'll link it along with the other character sketches you've done in the first post under the miscellaneous section, since it isn't from a specific scene, and unless you have a deviantart page or anything like that, I'll link to your OC story in the crediting, as long as that's alright with you.
Roamin12 wrote:I've been off the forums for awhile and I come back to this and, holy shit.
Quite a lot of has happened in the 1&1/2 months I've been gone.
All I can say is, that my feels, are all over the damn place (I read about the last eight or so chapter in one sitting.).
That doesn't sound entirely healthy, but welcome back, I'm glad to have your input again and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. There are a few other users who have dropped off the map (lolawesome, Elcor), who I miss seeing around as well.
random wrote:just imagine if the ending is all suzu's dream
You laugh, but Rikabro actually suggested at one time that the, erm, other endings that you wouldn't call a "good" ending could simply be dreams that she wakes up from. But I'm not interested in being lynched by the good people here, and having them be something as simple and ephemeral as a dream lacks the kind of sting that I'm going to try for.

Thank you for your patience, I understand people starting to get antsy again. I actually have one chapter pretty much completed, but I want to release it and the next one together to wrap up Act 3 in one go (you'll understand why later), as well as slow down a bit to make sure everything is a little more polished this time around. I hope to have that done by (late) tomorrow night at the latest.

Oh, before I forget, the really, entirely too generous artist Thighs has made a couple new pictures, one about stargazing, and the other, a scene from Down The Line. I'm really lucky, not only to be able to have my work read by as many people as I have, but also to be able to, well, inspire people to make things like that. It's almost the ultimate complement in my mind, and I'm really grateful to him and every other artist that has contributed to this story, as well as to all the people who have read and taken the time to share their thoughts.
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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by hernytan » Thu Aug 09, 2012 9:01 am

Roamin12 wrote:
Mirage_GSM wrote: And blaming herself for his extremely dumb luck of killing himself falling down on the street is... Well, I wouldn't go so far as to call it ridiculous, but it sure is a bit over the top.
It is a little over the top, but it still conveys the message well. And simply falling on the street is enough to kill a person if they fall the wrong way, a senior at my high school was jumping off some semi-large rock (about 2 1/2-3 feet off the ground.) on the school grounds that was next to the road, tripped when he was climbing on it to jump off for the second or third time, fell, busted his head open on the road, and now he's dead. And there are a lot of similar stories out there just happening on the a sidewalk or pretty much anywhere there is pavement
Ouch. That must have been... hard on him 8)
and yeah, a lot of trauma in real life doesn't make much logical sense. Emotions are something very difficult to quantify and rationalise, trauma being the foremost example; so Suzu blaming herself for her brother's unfortunate death is perfectly acceptable.
random wrote:just imagine if the ending is all suzu's dream
Besides, he already pulled that, he wouldn't do that again.
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Re: A pseudo-pseudo Suzu route (updated 8/1)

Post by Helbereth » Thu Aug 09, 2012 9:17 am

hernytan wrote:
random wrote:just imagine if the ending is all suzu's dream
Besides, he already pulled that, he wouldn't do that again.
There were some pretty obvious hints about it being a dream scattered throughout that sequence, too. By the end, I had a screwed-up expression on my face and a series of questions about the inconsistencies in Hisao's character -specifically as it related to his condition- which were explained as soon as she awoke.

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