Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1

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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by FrédéricKarateChopin » Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:28 pm

Ah, the help a girl with low self esteem realize her worth and then she realizes she can do better and cheats on you story, i know that one all too well :(. i like it so far

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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by Bi-Polar Hernandez » Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:43 pm

You MOTHERFUCKER.

You've just made a Hanabro very, very angry. Ruined my night.

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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by Sniper6133 » Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:48 pm

Does this by any chance link to this......?
http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t ... 958#p60958

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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by Brogurt » Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:54 pm

Sniper6133 wrote:Does this by any chance link to this......?
http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t ... 958#p60958
No. This is completely separate from my other works. This will reference none of them, and none of them will reference it.

I'm not sure what connection you're making anyway.

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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by FluffandCrunch » Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:57 pm

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPE!

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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by Mahorfeus » Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:01 pm

Brogurt wrote:
Sniper6133 wrote:Does this by any chance link to this......?
http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t ... 958#p60958
No. This is completely separate from my other works. This will reference none of them, and none of them will reference it.

I'm not sure what connection you're making anyway.
Hisao's concern that Hanako will find someone who isn't physically hindered, I'm supposing. Nothing that really links them together.
FluffandCrunch wrote:NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPE!
Come on, it's Brogurt. You're already stuck on this roller coaster.
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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by Sniper6133 » Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:09 pm

Brogurt wrote:
Sniper6133 wrote:Does this by any chance link to this......?
http://ks.renai.us/viewtopic.php?f=52&t ... 958#p60958
No. This is completely separate from my other works. This will reference none of them, and none of them will reference it.

I'm not sure what connection you're making anyway.
Was just a random thought.
I'm excited to read the next part :P

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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by tony246 » Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:25 am

...Ah, so this is what you were talking about.
Well, I can't say much since there isn't much out, but...erm...yeah...ok, it was interesting.

...I'm going to work on my stuff now before any irrational thought hits me.
I'm not good with this sort of thing, so I"m just going to say it here:
Thank you, Four Leaf Studios.

That is all.

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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by WolfStreak » Mon Apr 09, 2012 1:04 am

is post scriptum like your thoughts? or is it an epilogue? that is the only thing i got confused with, great writing as always and happy holidays! you know if you celibrate easter.
Streak as in streaking by at the speed of light.
Not the naked kind of streak...
That would just be odd >.>

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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by Brogurt » Mon Apr 09, 2012 1:09 am

WolfStreak wrote:is post scriptum like your thoughts? or is it an epilogue?
It's going to be like my other fics where I talk about what making the fic was like, what my thoughts on it are, etc.

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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by Silentcook » Mon Apr 09, 2012 7:21 am

Man... just break down, l2Ren'Py (or ONScripter, or KiriKiri, or Blade, or whatever) and go into original VN making already. :lol:
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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by Beoran » Mon Apr 09, 2012 9:27 am

This is indeed a very interesting idea. However, unfortunately you failed to convince me that Hanako could or would change so quickly and rather suddenly. I'd expect a timeframe of years, not months.
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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by Brogurt » Mon Apr 09, 2012 10:28 am

Beoran wrote:This is indeed a very interesting idea. However, unfortunately you failed to convince me that Hanako could or would change so quickly and rather suddenly. I'd expect a timeframe of years, not months.
I expected that this would crop up somewhere along the line.
The situation is going to be elaborated more on in the coming chapters, but that's all the assurance I can offer you.
Silentcook wrote:Man... just break down, l2Ren'Py (or ONScripter, or KiriKiri, or Blade, or whatever) and go into original VN making already. :lol:
http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-nc-nd/3.0/
Take note of the "nd".
And I don't really feel comfortable coming up with my own game assets and writing original characters and all the other stuff that goes into making a VN right now.

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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by WolfStreak » Mon Apr 09, 2012 3:17 pm

I guess Hisao just doesn't have the "heart" to handle a girl like Hanako.
Streak as in streaking by at the speed of light.
Not the naked kind of streak...
That would just be odd >.>

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Re: Mendācium (A Hanako Story)

Post by mainframe004 » Mon Apr 09, 2012 3:28 pm

God fucking dammit, man. It was probably your goal, but you've just made one more completely pissed Hanabro. What a great way to ruin someone's day. But hey, this is great, and rest assured that I will follow this fic.

Oh, and Hanako, you know you're better than that. Still, FUCK YOU.


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