Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1

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Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1

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I'll wait for Version 4.7.3.5 where Hanako never cheated on Hisao so nobody can bitch about it
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Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1

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txalolrn9 wrote:I'll wait for Version 4.7.3.5 where Hanako never cheated on Hisao so nobody can bitch about it
If you think any of the versions will have any number of digits in them that are greater than 1, you are mistaken.
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Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1

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My opinion on this story is exactly like the others. Hanako needs to be bitched slapped or something. I need a release of ANGER before that bad tasting ending. If anything i probably would of been happier if it was a bad ending seeing that we didn't get the release we needed, something like Hisao dying and Hanako living with the consequences of how she was the one that ruined her life and lost the only boy who saw past your damned scars and pulled you out of the dark hole you were in while loving you for who you are, as said earlier.

I'm probably repeating words from other posters. But Hanako never had the intention of telling Hisao about the cheating until the rape. Further more, if he had stayed in that room after the rape, Hanako (Seeing her personality in this story) would have most likely tried to make up with him, gotta keep that libido in check. Like seriously, AHHHHHH!!! Hanako! Hisao you stupid gamma idiot. You're more stupid in this than in every other canon route combined. This bitch cheated on you while full knowing what she was doing. She even had sex with him, man. D= I can understand you stepping around egg shells so she won't kill herself, but you gotta call up Lilly, get someone at school to look after her, and just step out of this nasty equation.

Necroing this because i can. This was just my thoughts on this whole ordeal. I know nothing will ever change but, i gotta say something. Now all of you who see this on the front page shall feel it!
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Endofone wrote:My opinion on this story is exactly like the others. Hanako needs to be bitched slapped or something. I need a release of ANGER before that bad tasting ending. If anything i probably would of been happier if it was a bad ending seeing that we didn't get the release we needed, something like Hisao dying and Hanako living with the consequences of how she was the one that ruined her life and lost the only boy who saw past your damned scars and pulled you out of the dark hole you were in while loving you for who you are, as said earlier.

I'm probably repeating words from other posters. But Hanako never had the intention of telling Hisao about the cheating until the rape. Further more, if he had stayed in that room after the rape, Hanako (Seeing her personality in this story) would have most likely tried to make up with him, gotta keep that libido in check. Like seriously, AHHHHHH!!! Hanako! Hisao you stupid gamma idiot. You're more stupid in this than in every other canon route combined. This bitch cheated on you while full knowing what she was doing. She even had sex with him, man. D= I can understand you stepping around egg shells so she won't kill herself, but you gotta call up Lilly, get someone at school to look after her, and just step out of this nasty equation.

Necroing this because i can. This was just my thoughts on this whole ordeal. I know nothing will ever change but, i gotta say something. Now all of you who see this on the front page shall feel it!
I feel like bitch-slapping author more than doing it to Hanako... Really? This fic just ruined my day... and the upcoming week :evil:
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Re: Mendācium (Hanako) - Version 1.1.1

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Hey, now... you mightn't like what Brogurt wrote but that's no reason to get mad at him. Hate the game, not the player, as they say. There's plenty of saccharine things around to read; go find one and unruin your own day.

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Good work. I still don't necessarily buy that Hanako would ever do this to Hisao, and I don't like her explanation of how she made that decision. I could buy her having a one-night stand after too much alcohol to a sleazebag in a bar, but to have her keep going back specifically for the sex over Hisao not being up to snuff in sex, it just feels...wrong. Her getting some kind of massive ego trip, to where she considers being with Hisao inferior to another relationship, just hurts. Taking that aside, I like how the rest of the story plays out. It was well written, and painful to read, in the good way where you want to keep reading. Thanks for writing. I may have to check out more of your stuff.
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Not sure if it's ok to bump like this but I'll do it anyway.
Best story:
Hanako > Rin > Lilly > Emi > Shizune

best girl:
Lilly > Shizune > Emi > Hanako > Rin

Eh, that's my opinion.
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sanduba wrote:Not sure if it's ok to bump like this but I'll do it anyway.
Don't bump for the sake of bumping, man. If you want to bring a topic back, have something to say about it. What are your thoughts on the story?
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Oddball wrote:
sanduba wrote:Not sure if it's ok to bump like this but I'll do it anyway.
Don't bump for the sake of bumping, man. If you want to bring a topic back, have something to say about it. What are your thoughts on the story?
I was just commenting so it'll be easier to find once I have time to read it.
Best story:
Hanako > Rin > Lilly > Emi > Shizune

best girl:
Lilly > Shizune > Emi > Hanako > Rin

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sanduba wrote:
Oddball wrote:
sanduba wrote:Not sure if it's ok to bump like this but I'll do it anyway.
Don't bump for the sake of bumping, man. If you want to bring a topic back, have something to say about it. What are your thoughts on the story?
I was just commenting so it'll be easier to find once I have time to read it.
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Troy wrote:One picture : http://puu.sh/57MCB.png
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Best story:
Hanako > Rin > Lilly > Emi > Shizune

best girl:
Lilly > Shizune > Emi > Hanako > Rin

Eh, that's my opinion.
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Oddball wrote:
sanduba wrote:Not sure if it's ok to bump like this but I'll do it anyway.
Don't bump for the sake of bumping, man. If you want to bring a topic back, have something to say about it. What are your thoughts on the story?
Heh...I was going to mention that the Library was intended to avoid having to bump topics, but then I see that this story isn't even listed yet. Someone should fix that :) .

As for what I think about the story...well, I just read it for the second time, figuring if people keep bumping it like this there might be some kind of redeeming quality to it beyond just being fairly well-written. Verdict: still find it kind of loathsome. Will remember not to read it again. :(
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dewelar wrote:
Oddball wrote:
sanduba wrote:Not sure if it's ok to bump like this but I'll do it anyway.
Don't bump for the sake of bumping, man. If you want to bring a topic back, have something to say about it. What are your thoughts on the story?
Heh...I was going to mention that the Library was intended to avoid having to bump topics, but then I see that this story isn't even listed yet. Someone should fix that :) .

As for what I think about the story...well, I just read it for the second time, figuring if people keep bumping it like this there might be some kind of redeeming quality to it beyond just being fairly well-written. Verdict: still find it kind of loathsome. Will remember not to read it again. :(
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Comrade wrote:
dewelar wrote:Heh...I was going to mention that the Library was intended to avoid having to bump topics, but then I see that this story isn't even listed yet. Someone should fix that :) .
That "someone" should be you then. If you won't submit it, who will?
Yeah, yeah :) ...submission complete.
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I read this story a while ago, pretty nice one in my opinion, the music was a great touch, but I didn't feel like making an account to comment on it so I left it as it was.

While I do think the "emo/suicide Hanako" character is a bit overused and expected, it's nice (imo) to see someone write about it and do it decently. Seen alot of writing about suicidal Hanako(and even a Yandere one where she baked herself and Hisao into a pie.. I think that was by Oddball but not 100% sure), of course the majority of writings on the original KS cast tend to be Hanako as well, because well, she looks so huggable, I believe the term is "moe". Anywho getting off topic here, great story and the music was a really nice touch that added a unique element to the fanfic that I have yet to see in another story.
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