Hanako Epilogue

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Re: Hanako Epilogue

Post by Homeless » Sun Mar 25, 2012 11:49 pm

I'm no expert, but I found the second set of stories hard to read. The characters didn't seem to flow. Some of the wording threw me off too.
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Re: Hanako Epilogue

Post by Oddball » Mon Mar 26, 2012 12:20 am

stanman237 wrote:

I guess you guys want the fluffy stuff which I also found today

Once again I did not write this, it was written by Mehkanik

Part 1: Two Plus Two http://pastebin.com/2772nsMN

Part 2: L-Look At Me http://pastebin.com/b3RdUmU6

Part 3: A Touch of Whitehttp://pastebin.com/T0Y9W4sF

Side Note: Mild Erotica and really happy ending
I enjoyed it. It was nice and sweet, and even funny in parts. he characterization was a tad off in a few places, but overall it was a good one.
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Re: Hanako Epilogue

Post by stanman237 » Mon Mar 26, 2012 5:44 pm

I didn't want to put second story because of that reason but the first one recieved depressing reviews so i thought might as well throw it in. It makes up for the first one.

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Re: Hanako Epilogue

Post by Homeless » Mon Mar 26, 2012 6:45 pm

Actually, once I got past the first chapter in the second set of stories you've posted, it got easier to read. And I did end up enjoying it, I didn't find it fluffy though, not like some of the other stories out there.
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Re: Hanako Epilogue

Post by zanger » Mon Mar 26, 2012 7:46 pm

Kenji and Miki seem really out of character... -_-
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Re: Hanako Epilogue

Post by God » Tue Mar 27, 2012 8:40 pm

Itsmrrda wrote:
stanman237 wrote:
I guess you guys want the fluffy stuff which I also found today

Once again I did not write this, it was written by Mehkanik

Part 1: Two Plus Two http://pastebin.com/2772nsMN

Part 2: L-Look At Me http://pastebin.com/b3RdUmU6

Part 3: A Touch of Whitehttp://pastebin.com/T0Y9W4sF

Side Note: Mild Erotica and really happy ending
It's still got one more part coming, as well!
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Re: Hanako Epilogue

Post by stanman237 » Wed Mar 28, 2012 8:51 pm

Found a bad end continuation of Hanako

http://pastebin.com/VZ4U3jPy

However, it was written by a guest so no credit can be given. All I could say is that once again I did not write it and all credit goes to this anon

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Re: Hanako Epilogue

Post by Brogurt » Wed Mar 28, 2012 9:42 pm

I think Bonertron69 wrote that, but I'm not sure and I CBA to ask him.
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Re: Hanako Epilogue

Post by MoonShadow » Thu May 16, 2013 11:17 pm

Sorry for the necro, but the link on the first post is dead, and I would really like to read it. Anyone saved it by any chance?
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