Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPLETE]

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Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPL

Post by YourFavAnon » Thu Aug 23, 2012 8:50 pm

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>mfw smut scene

I really enjoyed this one though, Vek. Do what you're comfortable with, maybe you should just write a few one-shots with the pair rather than continuing with a whole new act.
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Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPL

Post by Vekter » Fri Aug 24, 2012 1:54 am

YourFavAnon wrote:Image

>mfw smut scene

I really enjoyed this one though, Vek. Do what you're comfortable with, maybe you should just write a few one-shots with the pair rather than continuing with a whole new act.
This is probably what I'm going to do for a while, but I definitely want to come back and write more about then in an extended format. Kenji might have won the battle, but he hasn't necessarily won the war...

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Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPL

Post by Scissorlips » Mon Aug 27, 2012 6:40 am

Congratulations on reaching the end, and thank you for sticking with it. I enjoyed the finale, I think it built pretty well on the events of the previous chapter, and the sex scene was done tastefully, with the right amount of both awkwardness and familiarity that comes with two people meeting again after a long time apart. To have sex. Well, you know what I mean.
Kenji's internal monologue was enjoyable, and I liked the little epilogue scene at the end. I'm interested to see what other ideas you have for further scenes down the line with them, even things as simple as double dates with Hisao and one of the girls could be interesting given the dynamics of Kenji and Yuuko's relationship.
Nice work, Vekter.
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Re: Once Upon a Wartime (Kenji/Yuuko, erotic content) [COMPL

Post by Vekter » Fri Sep 14, 2012 12:57 pm

Scissorlips wrote:Congratulations on reaching the end, and thank you for sticking with it. I enjoyed the finale, I think it built pretty well on the events of the previous chapter, and the sex scene was done tastefully, with the right amount of both awkwardness and familiarity that comes with two people meeting again after a long time apart. To have sex. Well, you know what I mean.
Kenji's internal monologue was enjoyable, and I liked the little epilogue scene at the end. I'm interested to see what other ideas you have for further scenes down the line with them, even things as simple as double dates with Hisao and one of the girls could be interesting given the dynamics of Kenji and Yuuko's relationship.
Nice work, Vekter.
Thank you. Means a lot coming from you. I appreciate the help throughout this whole thing.

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