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Post by Doomish » Sun Mar 11, 2012 9:44 pm

Forget it.
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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by Demonhornz » Sun Mar 11, 2012 9:56 pm

You done depressed me again. But, as always, your stories are excellent. Hope you keep writing for some time to come.

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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by Mahorfeus » Sun Mar 11, 2012 10:21 pm

I am coming to loathe you. But not really.

Another great read, of course.
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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by Otakumon » Sun Mar 11, 2012 10:35 pm

Doomish wrote:Misha tells me Shizune's gay now
"Holy role reversal, Batman!"

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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by Mirage_GSM » Mon Mar 12, 2012 3:26 am

I knew how this was going to end from the moment she started coughing.
It says something that the first part of the story was supposed to be a happy day by your standards.
Emi > Misha > Hanako > Lilly > Rin > Shizune

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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by andros414 » Mon Mar 12, 2012 3:34 am

Doomish.

You are bloody effin' EVIL.

Listening to that song you hidden in the story while reading the end = Manly Tears.

I just KNOW that after each of these fics, this is Doomish:

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Shizune > Emi = Hanako > Lilly > Rin

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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by Rikabro » Mon Mar 12, 2012 3:45 am

I didn't realize you had extended this longer than the one you posted in /vg/. Glad I got a chance to read the whole thing.

I'm sorry I doubted your ability to write something "bittersweet." It is indeed that. The ending is gorgeous.

As if Misha weren't tragic enough already. :)

Beautiful story, Doomish.
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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by WolfStreak » Mon Mar 12, 2012 5:50 am

So what is the a ending of? is there something else i need to read?
Streak as in streaking by at the speed of light.
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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by Mirage_GSM » Mon Mar 12, 2012 6:20 am

Like he said in the OP: It's a one-shot. It's not the ending of anything.
Emi > Misha > Hanako > Lilly > Rin > Shizune

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griffon8 wrote:Kosher, just because sex is your answer to everything doesn't mean that sex is the answer to everything.
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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by Doomish » Mon Mar 12, 2012 8:26 am

WolfStreak wrote:So what is the a ending of? is there something else i need to read?
Oh, no, the tags refer to what might possibly happen after a hypothetical good ending in a Misha path, it's not the end of another story or anything.

But, thank you all for your comments. This was really my first attempt at turning the depressing into the bittersweet, because I figure I need to expand my horizons a little. Perhaps my next story will be downright heartwarming. I mainly write based on how I feel, and right now I'm in a pretty damned good mood. Only time will tell, I suppose. Stay gold, KS forums.

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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by johnmalkovich » Mon Mar 12, 2012 9:43 am

That was a great story. It doesn't really help that I pictured her as Ellie from Up! Which I was just watching.

Oh god... I just had an image of Hisao filling up thousands of balloons and flying their house to south America.
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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by Mahorfeus » Mon Mar 12, 2012 9:55 am

Doomish wrote:Perhaps my next story will be downright heartwarming.
And then I'll have to eat my hat.
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Hanako > Rin > Emi > Lilly = Shizune

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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by WolfStreak » Mon Mar 12, 2012 6:47 pm

The music made the story have feels i have not had since i played the game. Thank you you magnificent bastard!
Streak as in streaking by at the speed of light.
Not the naked kind of streak...
That would just be odd >.>

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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by Tezzeret » Mon Mar 12, 2012 10:07 pm

Doomish you SOB, why for you have to make me want to cry!?

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Re: Some Nights [Post-Misha Good End]

Post by Bagheera » Mon Mar 12, 2012 10:43 pm

Gods damn it, Doomish. You suck.

(also, this is a cut above Braving the Storm and several above both With Apologies and Little Faith. The quality of your work is steadily improving).
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