Scar Tissue- A Hanako Story (Pseudo-Complete)

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FluffandCrunch wrote:Well, it wasn't done by me, but I appreciate the effort and the fact it inspired Beoran to write something, anything.
That and BlackWaltz making art are something I'm really proud of; that a little story I wrote helped others create something of their own.
As for the ending, I'm still on the fence. I really love the story, so I have already thought of some places to take it. It'll be part of my other stories, but I may have a thing or two to continue Scar Tissue such as another chapter or epilogue (The morning after, discussion on the surrogacy, epilogue with the child).

Also, people keep hounding me to write a threesome scene, but I'm a little leery of it. :oops:
Write what you want, and if you don't want to do one, then don't. But if I were in your position I'd probably be tempted to make a troll threesome chapter just to piss people off. :D I'm evil like that.
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BobBobberson wrote: About bad endings though, you'd be sorely disappointed with what I have planned for Hanako in my fic, muhahahaha! There's not enough bad ending fics in this forum. So I'm doing my thing to make the KS world a little more sad.
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BobBobberson wrote:So I'm doing my thing to make the KS world a little more sad.
You bastard... :D
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FluffandCrunch wrote: Also, people keep hounding me to write a threesome scene, but I'm a little leery of it. :oops:
Imma subscribe to this topic just in case. :P
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That has to be the second most terrible thing that has happened to Lilly that I've read, the first being the Reconciliation (a Hanako bad-end story).
It is a great story but my heart (not a Hisao pun) cannot keep taking hits like that.
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Yeah it's a fap-fic, but it's a good fap-fic, and that's something worth noting. The music box was an especially nice touch.
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That was very well done. I've been told I'm a good judge of these things, so please take that as high praise.

There were some errors that my editing mind took note of, which always slightly breaks the mood for me. None were so humorous as this one:
I feel Lilly quack and moan in response.
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nemz wrote:Yeah it's a fap-fic, but it's a good fap-fic, and that's something worth noting...
Absolutely. The sex is interesting for more reasons that just sex. If that makes any sense.
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Aw man, why'd you end it right at the part I want to read more of? Face_Sad
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lolawesome wrote:Aw man, why'd you end it right at the part I want to read more of? Face_Sad
Because he got banned, mainly.
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BlackRockHanako wrote:
lolawesome wrote:Aw man, why'd you end it right at the part I want to read more of? Face_Sad
Because he got banned, mainly.
Wow, that is unfortunate.
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Elcor wrote:
BlackRockHanako wrote:
lolawesome wrote:Aw man, why'd you end it right at the part I want to read more of? Face_Sad
Because he got banned, mainly.
Wow, that is unfortunate.
It looks to be just a temp ban, though, so there's hope writing-wise.
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Hoitash wrote:It looks to be just a temp ban, though, so there's hope writing-wise.
It's permanent. You can find his writing in other places with a tiny bit of effort. (But it's not allowed to be posted here.)
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BlackRockHanako wrote:
Hoitash wrote:It looks to be just a temp ban, though, so there's hope writing-wise.
It's permanent. You can find his writing in other places with a tiny bit of effort. (But it's not allowed to be posted here.)
Dang, thanks for saying so....and found it.
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I enjoyed this fan fiction quite a bit. Thank you
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