Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)

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Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)

Post by Mountaineer » Mon Mar 05, 2012 5:02 pm

Hello everyone, I drafted this fiction over the course of a 14 hour period on March 3rd - 4th. It's an epilogue to the Emi route good end. I hope that you enjoy it as much as I did writing it!

I'm just going to leave the pastebin link as the fiction is over 13,000 words long, and I figure that is too big to fit into one post :)

http://pastebin.com/cGFttahS

EDIT: Minor corrections made, ending adjusted to not be as abrupt and to be more comprehensive, grammatical errors fixed. Please let me know if you spot anything else!

EDIT2: I just got some amazing Emi fan-art made from a scene in the fiction. I am blown away by the quality. I am overly thankful to the two people who made the drawing possible!

http://i.imgur.com/6YE2o.png(Not nude, but possibly NSFW)
http://i.imgur.com/JiP2N.jpg (SFW)
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Re: Ascent: An Emilogue

Post by FishyBroski » Mon Mar 05, 2012 5:25 pm

Awesome! Gotta go to work soon so I'll read it in the afternoon when I get home (:

[EDIT] Just read it through...All these feels T_T Thanks for writing this great fan-fic :)
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Re: Ascent: An Emilogue

Post by FluffandCrunch » Mon Mar 05, 2012 6:08 pm

Read this earlier in /ksg/ and I really enjoyed it, Mountaineer.
You had us going for a while with a possible bad end. I'm glad to see you were gentle with us. All through the reading I kept thinking what could possibly go wrong?
Hisao manning up was inspiring.
Well done, Mountaineer. Well written and very true to the character's personalities.
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Re: Ascent: An Emilogue

Post by misterprinny » Mon Mar 05, 2012 7:23 pm

I'm not a huge Emi fan, but I really loved this story. Good job sir :lol:

You should probably add a warning for sexual content, however. Some people don't like erotica (I was fine with it, added a nice touch to the story).
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Re: Ascent: An Emilogue

Post by Daitengu » Mon Mar 05, 2012 7:50 pm

I gotta say, that was a good fanfic. The caliber of fics in these forums are quite high even if there is a difference of taste sometimes..

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Re: Ascent: An Emilogue

Post by Mountaineer » Mon Mar 05, 2012 8:23 pm

misterprinny wrote:I'm not a huge Emi fan, but I really loved this story. Good job sir :lol:

You should probably add a warning for sexual content, however. Some people don't like erotica (I was fine with it, added a nice touch to the story).
Thanks for the heads up man. I'll add a tag to the subject now.

Glad everyone enjoyed it! The best part of writing it being able to share your creations with others. I'll be writing again soon but first I going to be spending most of my time playing Mass Effect 3.

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Re: Ascent: An Emilogue

Post by misterprinny » Mon Mar 05, 2012 9:37 pm

Mountaineer wrote:
misterprinny wrote:I'm not a huge Emi fan, but I really loved this story. Good job sir :lol:

You should probably add a warning for sexual content, however. Some people don't like erotica (I was fine with it, added a nice touch to the story).
Thanks for the heads up man. I'll add a tag to the subject now.

Glad everyone enjoyed it! The best part of writing it being able to share your creations with others. I'll be writing again soon but first I going to be spending most of my time playing Mass Effect 3.
Take your time sir. :lol: No need to keep a man from quality video gaming.
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Re: Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)

Post by YOTC » Mon Mar 05, 2012 9:45 pm

My only complaint is that you don't just go "get" a new pair of legs. I build the things for a living and fit them to people. New legs are usually a MONTHS long process. Fastest I've done it for someone was 4 days but I had all the parts around to do it. Getting something like a Pathfinder foot takes at least 2-4 days shipping and I know my company can't afford to keep them in stock.

Other than that, fun story.

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Re: Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)

Post by Mountaineer » Mon Mar 05, 2012 10:02 pm

YOTC wrote:My only complaint is that you don't just go "get" a new pair of legs. I build the things for a living and fit them to people. New legs are usually a MONTHS long process. Fastest I've done it for someone was 4 days but I had all the parts around to do it. Getting something like a Pathfinder foot takes at least 2-4 days shipping and I know my company can't afford to keep them in stock.

Other than that, fun story.
Oh! I tried to do some research before writing, including what hiking legs would actually look like. This is actually by no means the final revision of this tale, so I will be sure to edit the content to reflect the time it takes to get such a pair of legs made. Is there any more pertinent information I should know?

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Re: Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)

Post by Grand Haberdasher » Mon Mar 05, 2012 10:26 pm

Nitpick: The phrase is "That's my cue to begin." Other than that, good story.
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Re: Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)

Post by Mountaineer » Tue Mar 06, 2012 2:44 pm

Grand Haberdasher wrote:Nitpick: The phrase is "That's my cue to begin." Other than that, good story.
Thanks! I'll be sure to fix it when I go through and do my major proofreading spree. Glad you enjoyed it!

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Post by Lothbrok » Tue Mar 06, 2012 10:52 pm

We do need more Emi stories in here she doesn't get enough love so I'm happy to read this also Hisao doing that feat makes me think 8)

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Re: Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)

Post by Mountaineer » Wed Mar 07, 2012 11:58 am

Lothbrok wrote:We do need more Emi stories in here she doesn't get enough love so I'm happy to read this also Hisao doing that feat makes me think 8)
Thanks for reading! I agree, we need more Emi :evil: she is love, after all!

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Re: Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)

Post by RinellaWasHere » Thu Mar 08, 2012 1:10 am

Quite impressive. Your writing, at first, hooked me more than your plot, but by the end I was hanging on every word. Well done, my friend- your story is part of my headcanon for the Emi route.

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Re: Ascent: An Emilogue (Erotic Content)

Post by Mountaineer » Thu Mar 08, 2012 4:02 pm

RinellaWasHere wrote:Quite impressive. Your writing, at first, hooked me more than your plot, but by the end I was hanging on every word. Well done, my friend- your story is part of my headcanon for the Emi route.
Thanks for the feedback! You'll be pleased to know that I also updated the ending to add more flavor, and the possibility of a sequel. Enjoy, everyone!

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