Reunion: Hisao and Akira Avoid The Family

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Wha- Why... you're not allowed to do this ;-; come on man I just finished Clannad and I'm listening to sad music when I read this, at least put a feels warning in there
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somewhere deep in my mind, I feel my heart wishing the author to die a slow and painful death... Just kidding :)
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Hanako Nakai wrote:somewhere deep in my mind, I feel my heart wishing the author to die a slow and painful death... Just kidding :)
I feel the same minus the just kidding ;-; .. why would you do that to Akira of all people? It's like running over your talking dog
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i'm so confused

so, hisao was shopping with the ghost of akira? or was it a fast forward to her death kind of thing
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Yeah, she was only in his mind all the time. :'(
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Reading this directly after the Akira Pseudo route was not the brightest of ideas.
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Well if he's cruel, Thanatos would sort of make his story use this general setup as the ending. Which would be cruel. Meh. :'(
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The Akira pseudo-route is my favorite, to the point where reading this made me genuinely sad. It was well-written and enjoyable, but that twist ending is gut-wrenching.
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Remind me of one of Scrubs episode.

Very well writing, lot of bad feels.

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