Ten Summers Later

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FluffandCrunch wrote:“Same as ever! Still in Tokyo at her gallery. Those artsy types can't get enough of her. All she does is paint, wax philosophic and spend time with that boyfriend of her's!“
Is it bad that I got a bit jealous when I read that?
Great story. Though the fact that so many of the characters are still there 10 years laters kind of threw me off.
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rook wrote:
FluffandCrunch wrote:“Same as ever! Still in Tokyo at her gallery. Those artsy types can't get enough of her. All she does is paint, wax philosophic and spend time with that boyfriend of her's!“
Is it bad that I got a bit jealous when I read that?
Great story. Though the fact that so many of the characters are still there 10 years laters kind of threw me off.
That bothered me too for a split second...but the story was just tooooo much feel(s) good that I could ignore it.
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waynoinsano wrote:
Brogurt wrote:No offense, but I kind of stopped reading once I saw the implications that Hisao married Lilly instead of Hanako.
worse yet Hanako X Kenji.
Hey, there's nothing wrong with Hanako X Kenji. I think they make a cute couple... 8)
Emi > Misha > Hanako > Lilly > Rin > Shizune

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FluffandCrunch wrote:“Same as ever! Still in Tokyo at her gallery. Those artsy types can't get enough of her. All she does is paint, wax philosophic and spend time with that boyfriend of her's!”
Oh, didn't notice this the first time: 'hers' doesn't get an apostrophe. Ever.
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griffon8 wrote:
FluffandCrunch wrote:“Same as ever! Still in Tokyo at her gallery. Those artsy types can't get enough of her. All she does is paint, wax philosophic and spend time with that boyfriend of her's!”
Oh, didn't notice this the first time: 'hers' doesn't get an apostrophe. Ever.
Ah, thank you. Always open to a little help.
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awesome story. it was beautiful. .... but.... even IMPLIED. hanako x kenji.... Image
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OK i have to ask just for the sake of curiosity. Is this the first part of something bigger or is this a solitary story.
I don't have a favorite girl, they're all great.
Rika===Saki===Shizune=Lilly=Hanako=Rin=Emi
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I think this is supposed to be just sort of an epilogue, but you never know...
Emi > Misha > Hanako > Lilly > Rin > Shizune

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griffon8 wrote:Kosher, just because sex is your answer to everything doesn't mean that sex is the answer to everything.
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well that's helpful.
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Brogurt wrote:No offense, but I kind of stopped reading once I saw the implications that Hisao married Lilly instead of Hanako.
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If it makes you feel better, just imagine that Lilly lets Hanako borrow him the first weekend of every month and Thursdays and threesome nights.
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Oddball wrote:
Brogurt wrote:No offense, but I kind of stopped reading once I saw the implications that Hisao married Lilly instead of Hanako.
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If it makes you feel better, just imagine that Lilly lets Hanako borrow him the first weekend of every month and Thursdays and threesome nights.
...I like you, Oddball.
We're on the same wave length here.

I find it ironic that Brogurt is not okay with Hisao marrying Lilly, but is perfectly fine with Hanako instead pulling an NTR on him.
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FluffandCrunch wrote:I find it ironic that Brogurt is not okay with Hisao marrying Lilly, but is perfectly fine with Hanako instead pulling an NTR on him.
I'm sure he doesn't question how you get your kicks :wink:
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I really liked this! It was bit odd almost all the characters wound up becoming teachers, but considering how well written the story is, I don't mind it at all. You are one of my favorite writers, I must say. Loved Scar Tissue, cried my heart out at Regrets, and loved this one, so keep doing what you're doing.
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Chrono180 wrote:I really liked this! It was bit odd almost all the characters wound up becoming teachers, but considering how well written the story is, I don't mind it at all. You are one of my favorite writers, I must say. Loved Scar Tissue, cried my heart out at Regrets, and loved this one, so keep doing what you're doing.
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Nice.

Still, it's much more fun - when writing - to give the characters sad endings. Dunno why.
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