Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

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Post by Bagheera » Mon Feb 27, 2012 7:41 am

Specter Von Baren wrote:Could you also stop the pointless images at the end of every single post? Typically those are reserved for special occasions, not for every single time you say something. It's kind of like when someone puts a smiley at the end of every sentence and it gets on your nerves because they do it even if they're arguing with you so it comes off as really condescending.
Very much agreed. It's hard to tell which is more annoying, but the combination is downright nauseating.
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Post by scott1and » Mon Feb 27, 2012 8:40 am

I got a shout out :D

And while I am among those who would've liked to see Hanasho happening, the ending being open ended seems a tad more realistic, which I think suits this story just fine. Twas a good story, and good luck with the novel by the way.
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Post by themocaw » Mon Feb 27, 2012 12:27 pm

Yay I got a shoutout too.

Do you want to know how much I like this story? It's nearly got me writing fanfic of fanfic so I can do a post-story epilogue of Sho and Hanako. However, down that path lies me staring at a spinning top while holding a gun in my hand, so I won't do that.

Best of luck on your future endeavours :D.

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Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Post by CNB » Mon Feb 27, 2012 12:37 pm

themocaw wrote:It's nearly got me writing fanfic of fanfic
That's some next-level shit right there.

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Post by Robnonymous » Mon Feb 27, 2012 1:28 pm

scott1and wrote:And while I am among those who would've liked to see Hanasho happening, the ending being open ended seems a tad more realistic, which I think suits this story just fine. Twas a good story, and good luck with the novel by the way.
Thanks! :)

Going back to that first chapter I wrote well over a year ago has been interesting. It feels like it's on a whole other level from where I am now, even though I wrote it a while back. Kind of daunting, but I'm hoping to push through it.

themocaw wrote:Do you want to know how much I like this story? It's nearly got me writing fanfic of fanfic so I can do a post-story epilogue of Sho and Hanako. However, down that path lies me staring at a spinning top while holding a gun in my hand, so I won't do that.

Best of luck on your future endeavours :D.
Thanks, that really does mean a lot. :)

Although to be honest, I wouldn't mind if you decided to pick up Hanako and Sho's story. In fact, I'd consider it an honor. :oops:


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Post by CNB » Mon Feb 27, 2012 2:05 pm

Robnonymous wrote:And look at me, ending most of my sentences with smiles. 8)
That's it. You're not cool anymore.

Good luck writing your novel.

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Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Post by Mahorfeus » Mon Feb 27, 2012 3:38 pm

I can see it now.

themocaw: "Damn it Rob, I'm a fanfic author, not a ghostwriter!"
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Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Post by Robnonymous » Mon Feb 27, 2012 4:02 pm

Mahorfeus wrote:I can see it now.

themocaw: "Damn it Rob, I'm a fanfic author, not a ghostwriter!"
Bah, there wouldn't have to be any ghostwriting. ;)
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Post by themocaw » Mon Feb 27, 2012 4:19 pm

Mahorfeus wrote:I can see it now.

themocaw: "Damn it Rob, I'm a fanfic author, not a ghostwriter!"
"Reconciliation, Part 14, by Robonymouhelphelphe'sgotmechainedtoacomputerandhe'smakingmewritetheseficsforevercall911sincerelythemocaw."

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Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Post by Robnonymous » Mon Feb 27, 2012 4:29 pm

themocaw wrote:
Mahorfeus wrote:I can see it now.

themocaw: "Damn it Rob, I'm a fanfic author, not a ghostwriter!"
"Reconciliation, Part 14, by Robonymouhelphelphe'sgotmechainedtoacomputerandhe'smakingmewritetheseficsforevercall911sincerelythemocaw."
I told you to save that for Part 16!!!

*starts removing belt*
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Post by themocaw » Mon Feb 27, 2012 4:55 pm

Robnonymous wrote:
themocaw wrote:
Mahorfeus wrote:I can see it now.

themocaw: "Damn it Rob, I'm a fanfic author, not a ghostwriter!"
"Reconciliation, Part 14, by Robonymouhelphelphe'sgotmechainedtoacomputerandhe'smakingmewritetheseficsforevercall911sincerelythemocaw."
I told you to save that for Part 16!!!

*starts removing belt*
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Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Post by Mahorfeus » Mon Feb 27, 2012 5:03 pm

Well, at this rate it looks like Sho will end up being a homosexual robot sent from the future to con Hanako out of her money. Before getting hit by a bus. But enough of that dead horse.

Perhaps "ghostwriter" was the wrong word for it. This is starting to look more like Misery.
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Post by Robnonymous » Mon Feb 27, 2012 5:15 pm

Nah. I'm being totally serious when I say themocaw is free to run with the idea. I'm not saying it HAS to happen, but I'd certainly be curious to see another person's interpretation/continuation of something I've written.
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Post by themocaw » Mon Feb 27, 2012 5:40 pm

Robnonymous wrote:Nah. I'm being totally serious when I say themocaw is free to run with the idea. I'm not saying it HAS to happen, but I'd certainly be curious to see another person's interpretation/continuation of something I've written.
How is this for a continuation?

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Re: Reconciliation - (a Hanako bad-end story)

Post by Robnonymous » Mon Feb 27, 2012 5:43 pm

It is a thing.
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