Ten Drabbles in the Life of Akira Satou

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Re: Ten Drabbles in the Life of Akira Satou

Post by sloth4 » Fri Mar 23, 2018 9:18 pm

That was really sweet.

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Re: Ten Drabbles in the Life of Akira Satou

Post by NoticeMeOppai » Sat Apr 07, 2018 4:34 am

I liked this, nice premise and the repetition really drove the theme home.
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Re: Ten Drabbles in the Life of Akira Satou

Post by Oddball » Sun Apr 22, 2018 10:15 pm

Simple but every VERY effective.
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Re: Ten Drabbles in the Life of Akira Satou

Post by WorldlyWiseman » Wed Apr 25, 2018 9:58 pm

I love it. I'm a sucker for economy in storytelling :3
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