Weekend at Hisao's (Was: At the Train Station) - [Some Porn]

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Post by Command13 » Sun Mar 17, 2013 10:26 pm

This was really enjoyable, Shizunes' route seemed my least favorite (Although I did not dislike it at all.). This really made it a lot better. Also it was just really awesome overall.

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Post by motokid108 » Thu Jun 20, 2013 1:51 am

Made an account because of this legendary FF. 'Twas quite epic. Would love to see similar story lines (the ladies spending a weekend at Hisao's) with the other ladies. Good read. Read twice even. Loved the story, loved the adult content. More please :D
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Post by ChrisTheCat » Mon Jul 08, 2013 4:03 pm

And now I am all sad. I shouldn't read stuff like this, but I do and then I get all teary-eyed and CURSE YOU THEMOCAW.

Really though, this tic is brilliantly written, and I only picked up on one spelling error. Fantastic!

I particularly love how you made Shizune seem. She's my favourite girl of the five(/six), and as such I commonly run across five that portray her as an utter cow, thus making me angry.

Good job overall. This is not only my favourite story, but HEADCANON ACCEPTED.
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Post by dewelar » Wed Jul 24, 2013 2:26 pm

Although it appears the author of this story hasn't been around these parts for a while according to their profile, I want to make sure that, should they ever return, my admiration for this story is registered.

A lot of people don't like Shizune here, I know. I always liked Shizune herself, but felt her story was unfulfilling. However, the more I have thought about it, and the more I've discovered and processed, the more I have realized that it was me who wasn't understanding it properly. This continuation was what started me on the road to that understanding -- a long, complex, and ultimately extremely rewarding road. So, for that, I give themocaw my sincere thanks.
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Post by Etokie » Thu Jul 25, 2013 4:23 pm

Why do people keep reviving these fics. I dont think you understand why it is generally discouraged on these forums
People love feedback on their fics while and even after they finish. But a half a year/a year after they finish its stupid
Ripping these back to the front page to say that you liked it to an author who stopped following the forums long ago
Dont get me wrong, i dont hate it. That was how i found scissors suzu route. But it often is just not unnecessary and
Might create disappointment.
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Post by dewelar » Thu Jul 25, 2013 5:45 pm

Etokie wrote:Why do people keep reviving these fics. I dont think you understand why it is generally discouraged on these forums
People love feedback on their fics while and even after they finish. But a half a year/a year after they finish its stupid
Ripping these back to the front page to say that you liked it to an author who stopped following the forums long ago
Dont get me wrong, i dont hate it. That was how i found scissors suzu route. But it often is just not unnecessary and
Might create disappointment.
Since this one's complete, I don't think the "no request" thing applies. However, I do have another reason. I don't want good works like this one to get lost just because they're not new.

Good fanfic is, quite simply, very hard to find. I have been going through the forum archive, and I can count the number that I've found worth reading start-to-finish on one hand: this one, "Sisterhood", "Hanako's Story"...that might actually be all of them. I just got started reading "Tomorrow's Doom", which I see is an active one, and thus far it has a good shot at being number four.

I guess what I mean is that even if the author never comes back and reads my praise, it might alert someone else to the quality of the work. If my post got you, or anyone else, to read this work, then it was worth bumping it up.
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Post by Etokie » Thu Jul 25, 2013 5:51 pm

Actually dug this one out of the vault half a year ago. So i had already read it. But i get what you're going at, guess I'm just tired of logging on and seing these fics on the top of the list. Guess if it had been an Emi fic I hadn't read, i wouldn't have complained :D.
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Post by dewelar » Thu Jul 25, 2013 6:03 pm

Etokie wrote:Actually dug this one out of the vault half a year ago. So i had already read it.
Well, I only discovered KS a few weeks ago, and I'm still kind of in "find everything good connected to it that you can" mode.
But i get what you're going at, guess I'm just tired of logging on and seing these fics on the top of the list. Guess if it had been an Emi fic I hadn't read, i wouldn't have complained :D.
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Post by Etokie » Thu Jul 25, 2013 6:08 pm

Ah yes. I found it
http://pastebin.com/u/mehkanik
His Emilouge is beautiful. It's perhaps the best Emi fic I've read. But beware, you may cry.
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Post by dewelar » Thu Jul 25, 2013 6:12 pm

Etokie wrote:Ah yes. I found it
http://pastebin.com/u/mehkanik
His Emilouge is beautiful. It's perhaps the best Emi fic I've read. But beware, you may cry.
Thanks! Will read it after catching up with "Tomorrow's Doom"...or maybe during a break from it, because that sucker's long. Looks like some other good stuff there, too. As for the crying...well, comes with the territory, no?
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Post by Etokie » Thu Jul 25, 2013 6:21 pm

dewelar wrote:
Thanks! Will read it after catching up with "Tomorrow's Doom"...or maybe during a break from it, because that sucker's long. Looks like some other good stuff there, too. As for the crying...well, comes with the territory, no?
It does doesn't it? And Tomorrow's Doom is indeed long, but totally worth it. Just don't read too fast, you might miss out the good bits and waiting for new chapters is torture when you've read every fic on this forum. Well not everything, practically every fic besides all the Hanako epilogues. I mean i love Hanako but she is waaaay too popular on these forums, every other fic here is Hanako.
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Post by dewelar » Thu Jul 25, 2013 6:40 pm

Etokie wrote:And Tomorrow's Doom is indeed long, but totally worth it. Just don't read too fast, you might miss out the good bits and waiting for new chapters is torture when you've read every fic on this forum.
Oh, it's going to take me a while. I'm only on Chapter 6, so it's going to be at least a few days, maybe a week.
Well not everything, practically every fic besides all the Hanako epilogues. I mean i love Hanako but she is waaaay too popular on these forums, every other fic here is Hanako.
Heh, no doubt, and half the ones that aren't are Lilly with a side of Hanako. I loved "Sisterhood" (with one small but glaring exception, namely the misuse of the last line of the story), but found a whole lot of stuff that wasn't to my tastes.
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Post by griffon8 » Mon Aug 05, 2013 9:07 pm

Etokie wrote:Ah yes. I found it
http://pastebin.com/u/mehkanik
His Emilouge is beautiful. It's perhaps the best Emi fic I've read. But beware, you may cry.
I agree that it's probably the best Emi epilogue, but I do have problems with it. A discussion of that has already occurred in another thread, so I won't go into detail here. Suffice to say that I'm waiting for the author to finish the rest of his epilogues before I offer my final opinion.

Really, I should get busy writing my own Emi epilogue.
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Post by dewelar » Mon Aug 05, 2013 9:17 pm

griffon8 wrote:
Etokie wrote:Ah yes. I found it
http://pastebin.com/u/mehkanik
His Emilouge is beautiful. It's perhaps the best Emi fic I've read. But beware, you may cry.
I agree that it's probably the best Emi epilogue, but I do have problems with it. A discussion of that has already occurred in another thread, so I won't go into detail here. Suffice to say that I'm waiting for the author to finish the rest of his epilogues before I offer my final opinion.

Really, I should get busy writing my own Emi epilogue.
Heh...totally forgot about this discussion. I read through a fair amount of that author's work on Pastebin, and found it to be not particularly to my tastes. I will agree that it is probably the best Emi epilogue currently in existence, but sadly that happens to be a very low bar.
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Post by TS28 » Wed Feb 19, 2014 5:58 pm

I found this after browsing reddit forum about the game and after reading your story I had to make an account just so I can say thank you, that was fantastic! :D

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